Assassin/Ninja First time ive done a build, and its heavy spell...thoughts?

https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/#4_06...9X9X9X9X9c9m910K40uY05n1616wy0v161g00001001Z6
WynnBuilder build:
> Brainwash
> Petrichor
> Paradox
> Revenant
> CR-19X9X9X9X9X9c9m91
> CR-19X9X9X9X9X9c9m91
> Prowess
> Ambivalence
> Black [e6e6e6]
>>>> Black build, 52k ehp, 1.1k elifesteal, 20 ms, 11 mana/60k smokebombs, 52%ws

https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/#4_06...9X9X9X9X9c9m910K40uY0QZ1u16wy0w0o1g00001001Z6
WynnBuilder build:
> Brainwash
> Dondasch
> Paradox
> Blind Thrust
> CR-19X9X9X9X9X9c9m91
> CR-19X9X9X9X9X9c9m91
> Prowess
> Ambivalence
> Grimtrap [e6e6e6]
>>>> Grimtrap build, 39k ehp, 3.4k elifesteal, 12 ms, 10 mana/83k smokebombs, 35%ws

https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/#4_06...9X9X9X9X9c9m910K40uY0uQ1E1Bwy0o161g0000100036
WynnBuilder build:
> Brainwash
> Dondasch
> Paradox
> Revenant
> CR-19X9X9X9X9X9c9m91
> CR-19X9X9X9X9X9c9m91
> Prowess
> Ambivalence
> Blossom Haze [e6e6]
>>>> Blossom Haze build, 49k ehp, 1k elifesteal, 14 ms, 10 mana/31k cherrybombs, 73%ws

What are your thoughts on those builds? Like I said its my first time building ever, so maybe you have some tips/some way i can improve those builds? and yea I know heavy spell is kinda dead...still i think it was fun experimenting with ambivalence

 

https://hppeng-wynn.github.io/#4_06W0J-0nF0tZ0qo0qo0TN0uY0Gc0v16zK1r0e1g00000
WynnBuilder build:
> Brainwash
> Insulated Plate Mail
> Steel Wool
> Phage Pins
> Unspeakable
> Unspeakable
> Dragon's Eye Bracelet
> Ambivalence
> Flameshot Hilt []

this is an example of a real "practical" heavy spell build (50k dps, vanish-multi-multi cycle)
(I play this on a regular basis and it has a pretty easy time in LI and other contents, kinda cries in TCC phase 3 but is good everywhere else
(ignore the fact that its weaker than fshot melee in tcc due to stonewalker being busted)

some tips:

blossom haze isn't too good since cherry bombs rewards fast casting and you aren't gonna be casting fast
grimtrap is a cool concept for -4th cost, but the vanish cost increase is gonna hurt. your build gets theoretically like 40k dps assuming everything hits and you have enough mana (you don't have enough mana and smoke bomb isn't the easiest spell to always hit)

I'd recommend trying to bring vanish cost down to 1 (or at worst 2) for heavy spell assassin. It really hurts if you don't

your black build is missing the tierdrop which might be a good thing? idk. lack of health regen (in fact negative health regen due to paradox) combined with low lifesteal and no tierdrop is going to give you pain

 

ok thanks for the input :D one thing though, the black build doesnt have negative healthregen, it has 0 health regen right? or am i missing sth

 

paradox will flip your natural health regen negative if you drop to like 40%? hp or so, making it darn hard to recover from near death scenarios (heh just use potions)

 

oh shit i didnt know that! thank you!

 

Amazing as first build