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Build Lighthouse | Commissioned Spawn

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Qulaey, Nov 19, 2019.

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  1. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    Hey everyone! :D
    Recently did a commission for a small server. I just wanted to share because I think it turned out alright.
    Ask me for any techniques used that you don't understand. Critique is always welcome!
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    Note: this is a re-upload with a prefix, I had forgotten to add it in my last post
     
  2. Allysen

    Allysen Skilled Adventurer VIP+

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    Great build. I really like the render! I've never tried to make a render before, so I don't know much about it, but it seems like it was difficult to do. There are a few thing that you could improve in the build. There are a few random spheres on the grass. Not sure what those are supposed to be? They look a bit like rocks, so if that's what they are supposed to be, I'd suggest adjusting the shape a bit to make them look more natural. Also, the area in the center and the walls around it look a bit empty. It would be nice to see that area with more detail. I love the style you used for the terrain, and the flag in the front of the build is also very nice.
     
  3. Minitinipower

    Minitinipower just a guy

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    really nice build, the only thing is that I just think the trees are lacking in leaves? there's to much branch compared to leaves
     
  4. Squawk

    Squawk Penguin

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    Amazing build! I would agree with Minitinipower; the trees are definitely lacking leaves.
     
  5. RicochetfromtheD

    RicochetfromtheD 赵二

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    This is incredible Qulaey but I'd put some medieval houses on there
     
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  6. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    Now that you've brought that up I do agree lol.
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    The person I made this build for wanted modern, but hey medievial houses would fit perfectly. If I were to redo it medieval style I would've made it a pirate cove full of sunken ships.
     
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    RicochetfromtheD 赵二

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    ok
     
  8. robincaiye

    robincaiye ♧ the local (broke) emerald dealer HERO

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    On the contrary, I think that the lack of leaves makes the trees look unusually nice.
     
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