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Since you aren't getting much requests; posted this on Your Work, any feedback?
https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/wynn-inspired-manor.257110/

 

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Yo! I need help. I am trying to improve my house technique and detailing. I really like your last image.

Can you tell how I can improve on this house front? http://prntscr.com/qibzdt

THank you

 

Sorry for the late reply, I have been overseas traveling and visiting family.

First of all I think the roof looks great! and I love the red and brown pallet that you have addopted.

As for improvements of making it better I would suggest making the second floor of the building stick out one block, and make the roof just a little bit taller.

 

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Are those Grian heads on the noob's house? If so, it seems like they aare supposed to act like good luck charms lol.

 

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the grian heads are there to ward off the demons.

 

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bump10char I'll try my best to respond but im not very active these days.

 

You're looking a little lonely here so here is a house for you to critique or something :)

 

Qualaey your like the Gordan Ramsey of building its great!

 

Looking good. Definitely not bad. that tutorial was horrible, Im so sorry you had to sit through that, im sure it was very frustrating. Im planning on making a newer and better one soon. maybe in video format. If you found it helpful, thank god. if not in terribly sorry. That was made more as a shitpost than anything else.

ok enough rambling...

PROS:

First of all, I love the pallet you have chosen, that is really good use of the bark blocks and the end stone and all that, very creative!

Second, I love how you've attempted to add the "inbetween bits" between the two stories. That post made it sound extremely confusing so i am planning on making a better one soon.

Thirdly I applaud you for trying diagonals. I know its hard, but its a very good attempt, keep at it.

Cons:

I am very glad you tried to do something creative with the shape, but Im not sure about it though, because overall the house is pretty much a circle.

You want to have certain bits that stick out. An easy way to do this is to start with a very rough shape. such as rectangles, diagonals, and cylinders.

drawing it out on a piece of paper or paint helps.



this was basically the rough floor plan for this:



Also I'd urge you to give your house more height, differences, as that makes a world of difference.

Im glad you followed it and didn;t get lost. I am working on a newer and better method for building these houses above.

 

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