Lore/Story Something I Gave Up On.

This is a rewrite of the desert ultimate discovery.
I was going to write it into a horror story, where they are trapped inside the chamber, slowly starving.
However I lost passion in it, so I figure I should post the rewrite that I did finish.

Spoiler: Story

My feet hit the scorching sand beyond the barrier, my homeland under my feet, my father waiting, standing idly, yet taking up more room then the rest of the world combined. His existence may have filled the chamber with this strange, otherworldly presence; however, I am not scared; the fact of his power is now known to me. Three long years adventuring into the lands beyond home have given me the truth of his staff, the secret to his never-ending life, the thing that allows him to rule this land with an iron fist, that allows him to be such an abomination of power. I now entered the chamber in which the mass resides.

Emperor- "Ah, bright days, my 26th son is here. How are your travels beyond the walls Hasher?"

Hasher- "Life beyond the walls is... different, vibrate, but most importantly, magical."

Emperor- "Well, not every being is capable of the things I am, you know this."

Hasher- "Ha, yes well, I know that's not true now father, you see I've learned the facts of the matter."

Emperor- "What do you mean?"

Hasher- "The staff, now, give it to me."

Emperor- "What do you mean, why?"

Hasher- "Don't play ignorant with me old man; GIVE IT TO ME, NOW!."

My hand pressed against the staff, thrusting it away from the body of my so-called father. In my opposite, a knife priced his stomach, red warmth spilling over my sin. 'Haha, I did it, I actually did it. I killed him; I killed the son of a bitch.' My knife, as well as his life, leaving him forever, his limp, body falling to the floor.

Hasher- "It's mine; I did it."

Guard- "Ha-Ha-Hasher... What have you done? Your father he's, he's dead!"

Hasher-"Like I care. His immortality is a lie, it comes from his staff."

At that moment, winds begin to blow. Sands filling the chamber, everything falling into ruin. If only I could have known the mistake I had made that day.

Note that this was from like a year or two ago, it was just sitting there, so I thought I would post it.

 

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