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Build Just A Little Cave Thing I Tried Out, Full Build Out Soon!

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by jasonmzx, Aug 27, 2019.

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  1. jasonmzx

    jasonmzx Skilled Adventurer

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    full build out soon guys
     
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    Qulaey weeb

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    Please post pictures without shaders?

    Thanks. :)
     
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    Qulaey weeb

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    Even with the shaders I can already see a couple of issues.

    You really have to try and improve your structure building! Almost every single structure in this build has some sort of flaw. for example look at this mushroom stem
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    Its just a mess of stairs and slabs with no real coherent structure! I really hope that you can see that.


    Another thing is this pillar over here, the thing is not overdetailed but its badly detailed. The promblem here is that the pillar is too small, with it being this small it is difficult to make it look good. Even I Probably can't do it.
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    Not to mention just the general messiness of the build!

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    Messy and mediocore terraforming. Atleast smooth out your walls and floors, before you start building structures.


    In general I think it looks lovely if you stand from a fair distance and have shaders on, but if you get into the details, the whole thing falls apart. Please consider my advice, I really hope you found them helpful. :)
     

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    jasonmzx Skilled Adventurer

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    Thanks so much for actually taking the time and giving these points buddy, I see where you coming from on some of these and you are absolutely right, Look out for the full build man! cheers :)
     
  5. CACKFLAKSTACK

    CACKFLAKSTACK haha very funny heheh heheh

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    In general it is pretty impressive but I common theme with your builds is very wacky pallet. Make it blend like stone,andesite and cobble. In my opinion the bedrock and diamond ores do not fit in this build same for the obsidian. I am not saying remove the blocks entirely but make it look better because now it is just a spam of blocks that don't fit at all.

    I don't what is that thing above the purple flame but make it better or remove it. It doesn't look good

    TLDR; looks like LSD and flame extractor not good! :(
     
  6. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    I am super glad that you found them helpful :D

    Love your work!

    Keep up the awesome builds, you'll get there someday.
     
  7. TacTrip

    TacTrip Old Head HERO

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    The shaders make it look nice, but they make everything look nice. From what I can see, good job anyway!
     
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