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Build A Pimped Out Trumpet

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Phurple, Aug 19, 2019.

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  1. Phurple

    Phurple The Plebian VIP+

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    i made a trumpet that's p pimped out with stuff and i hope you guys enjoy it

    Some shortcomings to point out was that the general shape of the trumpet could've been more realistic towards a real trumpet, but I didn't really make it extremely accurate. The palette could've been less random, the flowers definitely needed improvement, and there are other nuances that could use some fixing.

    I want to present the idea of something we might see in the real world, like an instrument, with extreme vibrancy. I wanted the trumpet to look as if someone had splashed paint on, and for the greenery and the tiny add-ons to make it look so absurd that it changed the idea of the instrument.
     
  2. Druser

    Druser ele defs don't matter HERO Featured Wynncraftian

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    Gaia as a trumpet
     
  3. Quint

    Quint least estrogenated scripter HERO

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    trumpet max
     
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  4. valvoid

    valvoid Build/CMD Hybrid HERO

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    thats actually sick haha
     
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  5. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    Its especially hard to picture it in the 'real world' to qoute your post, as the porportions are extremely off for both the trumpet and the flowers. Even if the trumpet was up to standard, it does not really meet your 'design critirea' so to speak, I believe the effect of the 'splashing paint' could definitively be better executed.

    Also try avoiding unnessceory details unless they are a crucial part of the build. (see below)
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    I find it strange how there are just little houses on this trumpet.

    I definitively think your composition could have been better. Right now this build is just a trumpet... Its more of an 'asset' to a build rather then a complete project.

    Overall, Personally I see alot of potential with this project, but this potential is held back by many technical details. I see a very sound start to a project in this build. I hope you find my advice helpful :)
     
  6. Quint

    Quint least estrogenated scripter HERO

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    Please just why
    WHY

    This was so unnecessary like
    It's not supposed to be perfect
    It's a for funsies thing

    You don't need to stamp on every build here
    Solicited criticism is always good but he wasn't asking so shh pls
    Ok bye
     
  7. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    I am sorry if I have offended you in any way, but I was simply trying to add on to what the original poster has said.
     
  8. CACKFLAKSTACK

    CACKFLAKSTACK haha very funny heheh heheh

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    Very good, if it was lasagna. I might have gone down in history as one of the best builds in architectural design history.
     
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  9. Turbostratus

    Turbostratus Newbie Adventurer Media CHAMPION

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    kinda reminds me of a machine gun when I squint my eyes and imagine myself holding it as one :D

    jokes aside though, very nicely done, some good building skills you got there ^
     
  10. 8bitkefka

    8bitkefka Travelled Adventurer VIP

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    that is awesome +1
     
  11. TacTrip

    TacTrip Old Head HERO

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    Can't say I've seen anything like this, impressive!
     
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