Music Uncontrollable Ecstasy(fan-made Wynn Music)

So I was bored today and decided to mess with the nbs for a bit
This is how it turned out.

This is my first time composing a song so expect it to be horrible lol
and the name is cringy I know

Open for criticism

 

Doesn’t rly fit right to any aspect of the RPG except shattered minds, but its mood is too ‘conscious’ (compared to the insane feel in shattered minds). The melody is also too distinct and too inconsistent. Wynn music generally is divided in different ‘parts’ in which melodies iterate.

 

Thanks!I was just experimenting if wynncraft's soundfont can sound good when it comes to different styles of music

And for the melody thingy,I knew nothing about leitmotif when composing this song so it really sounded too inconsistent to me as well now.

 

hey!

this song is some good stuff for a first composition
the progression and the way you develop the melody is really great
overall, this piece is very effective in its harmony

now my criticisms:
having the bass play a chord every chord change sounds like solid move harmony wise, but i feel it doesn't work as well with the wynncraft soundfont
the dbass sound is very muddy so a chord sounds very unclear in it
id recommend creating a bassline using, harmonizing with fifth intervals or octaves if you really need to, accentuating the chord thats being played
as for the overall structure, i feel like it could use a lot more dynamic parts. right now, the arp, bass, and drums are doing the same thing the entire song
the song would benefit a lot if you changed what each part was doing during different parts of the song
for example, the arp could change patterns and play with a different rhythm after 2 measures, or the drums could slow down during