Mage/Dark Wizard Help Monster Build

Yesterday I bought a monster using my dabatons and some raw so I started attempting to make a build for it. Right now, I've made two builds for it, but would like to see if they can be improved at all. I'd prefer if the build met the following criteria:
-I don't want to use melee monster btw
-Preferably 8/4s or higher mana regen (no higher than 12/4s excluding when holding nepta) with decent ish intel
- -100 or higher defenses without being powdered
-While I'm fine with -ls, I'd prefer no -ms
-14k or higher hp
-At least 10.5k meteors
- -20% or higher walkspeed
-Not extremely sp tight
-Not super expensive (a max I'd like to spend for buying gear would be around 16le)
-No other mythics in the build
-I'd prefer you to fire powder monster as it's already fire powdered
-If able, it'd be nice if it could dual wield nepta for things with insane fire def (cough Cybel cough). If it can use Nepta, then preferably 11k hp or higher when holding it.
-Suggesting the 14k hp requirement, this shouldn't be that hard, but at least 1.2k heals would be appreciated
Currently, these are the two builds I've made for it.
https://wynndata.tk/s/wVBA45
Cancer gives a nice chunk of hp here as well as giving a chunk of defense sp. The build nearly hits 16k hp (2k higher than my preference), as well as having 11/4s mr to help spell cast a lot easier. However, it does hit 10.7k meteors, which does hit my requirement but is on the lower ish side of what monster can hit. The only defense that's annoying is the -100 earth def, but since it's dead on -100 that's fine. It's also not that sp tight, only requiring decent defense for cancer and decent def/intel for hamseys.
The other build I've made so far is this https://wynndata.tk/s/chLkPV
Considerably higher damage with 13.3k meteors. Lower on the spell casting side though, as it has 9/4s mr and lower intel. It's also got -thunder def now, but it's only -60 so idrc. 1.5k ish less hp as well. Unfortunately, it's not able to use nepta with it either (that's fixed if I swap clockwork to finesse though, losing only 300 ish meteor damage). I'm probably favoring the tankier build over this one, but I'm still deciding.

I'm open to other suggestion or improvements to those two builds (or just different builds entirely). If you're going to make a hybrid build that utilizes mana steal, then the mana regen requirement may or may not apply depending on the build. Thanks!
P.S You can use any LI items, Hive Items, and/or dungeon items in the build. Merchant items are fine as well as long as I don't have to buy a load of them for a lot of money.
Also yes, I used the search bar after making both these builds to look for improvement, but the only good builds I found were ridiculously sp tight or melee monster, so yeah.

 

long post no replies feels bad sry can't help

 

alright this is gonna be eas-
https://wynndata.tk/s/WlhsRd

fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff (sp tight anyway with paradox + 3eye so)

https://wynndata.tk/s/NlVzxs
https://wynndata.tk/s/wAEhTB sp tight? where?

 

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