Build Sum Mountains Lmao

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/508258774218178561/510877490479104011/2018-11-10_19.04.26.png
first landscape i have ever made,
feedbacc plz im bad at this i have 0 exp points REEER


@Thomka

 

What method did you use to make these? I would recommend smoothing it a little, and making your slopes not as steep, as well as maybe having some of the mountains have smaller peaks

@Snerp

 

I used grians method of shaping in his voxel sniper tutorial and colored it after geminitays tutorial

btw i asked snerp on discord for sum improvement tips that meanie didnt reply tho :c

 

These mountains are very nice, you have seemed to have grasped the concept of a palette well good job

 

I think that you have a lot of potential, good job this is actually one of the better mountains that I have seen on this forum! Its not an ice cream cone shaped like most of the other mountains on wynn and it does not look like that it is made out of blobs like most of the mountains on Wynn. Just one thing, I would advise you to use some angle masks, and make more "roots" for the mountains. Nice job on the gradients tho, also for the river, try and make it more realistic. Also please don't use the splatter brush, its bad.

Good luck with future endevors!
I would rate this 3/5.

 

Im not that good with english, could you explain what you mean with "more 'roots' for the mountains" and also I dont really know what "angle mask" means so could you explain what that stands for?

Anyway. Thanks for the detailed feedback :)

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i actually added more blocks the further i was getting i had no actual palette prepared i made it while i was in the middle of landscaping lmao

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i love how i just wrote 2 different text syles as replies xd

 

I forgot my school has discord blocked again
brb time to get a vpn