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Build Some Sorta Floating Island Thing

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by saltii, Jul 29, 2018.

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is it good

  1. yes

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  2. yop

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  1. saltii

    saltii Well-Known Adventurer CHAMPION

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    i dunno but its only the floating island in the picture, anything in the backgrund aint pert of it coo? k wel im gon put pic now
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    plz leav comment, scribe, like, tel ur momma, an gimmie sugestions on how to imrpove
     
  2. Pifg

    Pifg aaaaaaaaaaaa

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    You look like you could design starter islands for a skyblock server
     
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  3. saltii

    saltii Well-Known Adventurer CHAMPION

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    there pics in the wynn texturep ack
     
  4. Quint

    Quint least estrogenated scripter HERO

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    SINCE WHEN COULD YOU TERRAIN?
     
  5. saltii

    saltii Well-Known Adventurer CHAMPION

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    i cant
     
  6. Quint

    Quint least estrogenated scripter HERO

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    ikikikikikikik that was my point
     
  7. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    I immediately see a couple of glaring problems with this build....

    The shape of the island: A cliche spike, these islands can look good if done properly, try adding more shapes surrounding it to compliment the main island. this will push the island into the foregorund and therefore inprove it as a whole

    Lolipop trees: Lolipop trees are used to define trees with one single trunk and a jumble of leaves, like a lolipop, these trees are unrealistic and an eyesore. consid the ter making your branches spread out more next time and put leaves at the tips of branches.

    Coloring: the coloring of the islands is not ideal, it is a bold mix of cyan terracotta cobble and andeside, the bottom the island is overdetailed and looks extremely messy, considering next time, not to randomly jumble up blocks and try not to slab spam with your terrain. Your terrain should compliment your main subject, not take over the main scene. Also please put some thought into coloring terrain next time, please do not mix random blocks, rocks and stones come in veins and patches, they are usually not randomly spread around all over. consider looking into Go paint and coloring your terrian. this method helps ALOT.
     
  8. Skywalkinerate

    Skywalkinerate For The Wynn

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    It a great build.Like the greenery you put
     
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