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Fan Quest I Guess?

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by MajorMiner, Jun 26, 2018.

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  1. MajorMiner

    MajorMiner We're in the midgame now CHAMPION

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    Bak’al: So, you destroyed the heart of corruption?

    Bak’al: Bold move, but a foolish one. Now you've got my attention you little bastard

    Bak’al: I'll finish you here and now, I don't need another “Bob” on the loose, and in my way!

    Bak’al: Lucky for you, without the heart I can't use magic. However, believe me, I can still beat the hell out of you!

    00:13

    The ground shakes beneath your feet, and the ceiling of the temple begins to collapse. It's probably best to…

    00:22

    RUN

    Bak’al: You can't run from your inevitable death! Just save yourself the pain and accept your death here and now!

    00:30

    Bak’al runs after you

    You see corrupteds rushing out, completely ignoring you


    00:43

    You are approaching the exit, Bak’al and the collapsing temple closing in

    Bak’al: Wait.. No… NO..

    Bak’al: NOOO-

    Bak’al’s scream is cut short by the now collapsed ruins on top of him

    You are out of breath, but give a sigh of relief as Bak’al is gone, for now anyways

    You realize there is still more running to be done as not only was the temple collapsing, but the whole realm was beginning to shatter

    You narrowly escape the portal to the Roots of corruption to see the once tall rigid dark spikes that covered the land, drooping and pale


    The undead who were once ones not to be reckoned with, we're now burning and fading away

    You have won the battle, but not the war...

    You head back to Ragni and approach the King


    King of Ragni: Once again Young Master, you have proven you are a worthy Wynn warrior, surpassing that of the Twains, and even Bob

    King of Ragni: Unfortunately for you, that means you are now in the way of the Grand Scheme of things

    King of Ragni: you served your role well, but now it's time to end it

    King of Ragni: Confused? Good… Good

    King of Ragni: You see knowledge is power, and quite frankly, right now you are too powerful for my liking

    King of Ragni: You already know too much

    King of Ragni: It was nice knowing you, Young Master… heh heh

    The Kings royal guards take you away, but not before you witness the King retrieving a familiar crystal from a bucket of lava with a grin on his face

    King of Ragni: Oh, how much you don't know…

    The words echo through the halls as you are dragged to some unfamiliar place

    You are put in a cell that debilitates your magic, and you are knocked out by the guards

    You hear a voice in your unconsciousness, “Come… come…” says a soft voice, from a far away, yet familiar land. A voice of… Royalty?


    [Quest Complete: Two Kinds of Corruption]
     
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  2. Moss

    Moss shoutbox meme supplier

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    what is this suppose to be
     
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  3. MajorMiner

    MajorMiner We're in the midgame now CHAMPION

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    A fan quest I guess
     
  4. Moss

    Moss shoutbox meme supplier

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    what does that mean
     
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    MajorMiner We're in the midgame now CHAMPION

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    Like a fanfiction, but a quest since this is Wynncraft
     
  6. Jbip

    Jbip yea QA GM CHAMPION

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    That's kinda cool, not sure about the "King of Ragni is actually evil" thing, but it's cool!
     
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    So do you die? Where will you get teleported after this? How will this look like? Why is the quest completed when you are knocked out or dead?

    What will the king use the crystals for? And will there be a second quest?
     
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    MajorMiner We're in the midgame now CHAMPION

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    No, you don't die, you are just unconscious. You will be teleported to another realm temporarily, the realm of Dreams if you will.

    I'm not saying this would be an actual quest, I just wanted to make a fanfiction but I made it in quest style because it's Wynncraft.

    The quest is completed when you are knocked out because it's supposed to be a cliffhanger, and yes there will be another quest where you get broken out of the cell.

    As for the what the crystals will be used for, no one knows ;)
     
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    Interesting. One more question:
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    How did the player end up with bak'al in the first place?
     
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    MajorMiner We're in the midgame now CHAMPION

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    Thanks! :D

    I made the King of Ragni evil based on some theory I saw about it that I thought was a cool idea, and I've always found the King of Ragni to be suspicious...

    Like why is he a villager decsended from Gavel royalty? Why is there a giant mine with a crystal right behind Ragni? Why does he make you go around the province helping people instead of including you in an organized army?

    I just always found something off about him, ya know?
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    Well you see I came up with the idea from the music actually, and when I heard it I imagined the player escaping a collapsing temple with someone chasing behind them. So I needed a character to do the chasing that wasn't already killed in the lore, but is important enough. And Bak'al was free real estate, so I choose him.

    So basically where I started typing the quest on the post is the middle of the quest, and I haven't come up with the beginning of the quest. But there is definitely a reason you end up in the Nether with Bak'al, I just haven't come up with it yet.

    Although Bak'al is there because you caught his attention when you destroyed the so called "Heart of Corruption" so he teleported to you before he could no longer use magic to try and stop you.

    So supposedly you are in the Nether, or the Realm of Corruption because you wanted to destroy the "Heart of Corruption" once and for all and get Bak'al's attention. The Heart of Corruption being the physical embodiment of what keeps the realm stable and in power. I know it's a bit of a long shot, but hey, I tried xD
     
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    Aya Very Serious Gensokyo Journalist HERO

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  12. MajorMiner

    MajorMiner We're in the midgame now CHAMPION

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    Thanks! Lol
     
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    Actually if you die you can add in the player going to Death's Realm instead or something like that
     
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    MajorMiner We're in the midgame now CHAMPION

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    Thanks for the suggestion, but that's not really what I want for what's going to happen next :)
     
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