Build Asking For Feedback On These Builds.

Hey there radical cats, it's me Sonick. I wanted to ask you all for feedback and suggestions on how I could improve on these builds.

Imgur album: https://imgur.com/a/6C9o0

Thanks g's.

 

I absolutely love your structures, they're great! You manage to make nice detail and not too much or too little. But they don't seem to fit in. Your terrain isn't really that good so imo that's what you could get better at. If you get better at terraining you could make your incredible builds fit in a nice landscape.

 

You need to work on your terra-forming and the details of your structures. At higher leves of building spaming stone bricks, walls, stairs and making them hug the building isn't gonna cut it any more. You need to think about the structure of the buillding. It is a common mistake too see someone fill in every piece of blank wall with slabs and fences. You really need tho think about the deapth of the builds that you are making and depth does not mean spaming slabs and fences this is especially visable down below in this picture, on its pilliars. Deapth means supports at the botton and centre of your structures, using blocks that complement that of your main build pallet. I can see that you have made an attempt at this with your "villiage under a massive tree build" on the pilliars under that giant pavilion but the thing is you only used stone bricks, which does not conteast your current pallet nor does it bring it out, as you have also used it for the details. This issue is mainly in the first half of the pictures that you have sent out. Reusing details that close with your dock is a massive big no no, this makes your build look repetive and crude. in the later pictures I can see that you are begining to develope your own style which is highly encouraged!

To summarise, things to work on...
-Terraforming (If i went into that, this post would litterally be a novel.)
-The general shape of your structures
-Don't over detail
-Trees, still need work
-Your pallet, Try and incorparte gradients in terrain and builds. Learn to use #lighten and #darken
-Finish your builds, dont give up half way through

Generally saying, definitely above average ;) gr8 work!!! :D

 

Thank you so much dude bros <3