Lore/Story Fan Quest: Under The Sea

Hello, its me, Moldavite.

Today, I got a quest for you. I used this for my GM app, so I hope its good. (This quest is kinda the revamped version from what i sent, i made it a teeny bit more interesting parts

Spoiler: Under the Sea quest

Quest Name: Under the Sea
Level min: 35
Length: Medium

Stage 1: Talk to Old Man Moris at the Nemract Docks.
Talking to Moris without Level min be like:
Moris: Hey there, sonny! Seems your quite hungry for an adventure! Well, ya came to the right place, but not at the right level. Come back to me once your at level 35! Heheh!
Talking to Moris with level min be like:
Moris: Oh, howdy-doo, sonny! Seems like you came to the right place for adventure!
Moris: Say, have you ever wondered if a town lay on that ocean, infront of us?
Moris: Well, that was the good o'l days, but, there was! Heh, but I was just a lad when it was floatin'.
Moris: Frumans call it... Atlantis, I think. Fruma' lackey sitting in their tavern, spittin' out words claimin' that it was a fairytale!
Moris: But it ain't no tale in Nemract, sonny boy. It was there, for REALSIES.
Moris: I remember, oh i do, on how that city became a fairytale in Fruma and a dissapointment in Nemract..it was a terrible event. Your lucky you haven't lived here.
Moris: You see, boy, The food shortage was on its peak. They were looking for some lackey to tackle on such a big problem in Wynn.
Moris: Nemract, a poor city, decided to cash in. They decided to chop up all those Atlantis fishies! Good gosh, it was brutal, sonny! But they gained alot of emeralds!
Moris: Nemract was gleaming on the sight of emeralds, as butchers started chop-choppin! Who knew that one emerald would cause the downfall of a city! Its unbelievable!
Moris: And after they ran out of Atlantian meat to sell, they started losing money, 'cause they aint gettin more fish! Then Ragni and Detlas declined their offerin'. Nemract was back to being a poor town again, after the loss of Atlantis.
Moris: Here is where you come in, sonny. Grab a breathin' helmet, grab yerself a boat, and find the ruins of Atlantis. I want to relive my childhood again and see if its still there! Oh ye, and I wrote the coordinates of where Atlantis was on your quest bookie thing, when I was a lad.
Moris: Good luck, sonny! Have a safe voyage!

Stage 2: Find the ruins of Atlantis. Once your there, you are greeted with some dialogue.

Weak Atlantean: Curse Nemract! Why would they hurt us?
Weak Atlantean: Did they do this, just over an emerald?! Fools!
Weak Atlantean: Without Atlantis, we are nothing...

Stage 3: Go deeper in the depths.

Weak Atlantean: I THOUGHT THEY WERE OUR FRIENDS!
Weak Atlantean: NEMRACT WAS OUR DOWNFALL?!
Weak Atlantean: IM SO SURE THEY USED THE GREEN JEWEL FROM THE PROPHECY TO DESTROY US!

Stage 4: Enter the ruined building.

Weak Atlantean: A human...! You did this to us! Now, you will pay for what you have done!!

Stage 5: Slay the atlantean horde.

Stage 6: Enter the throne room.

King of Atlantis: Oh... My poor town... Why?
King of Atlantis: A human... behind me? Heheh...
King of Atlantis: So your thinking... Your gonna kill me and loot my emeralds off of my corpse? Well, that... might be a little bit of a problem.
King of Atlantis: Kings, like me, are meant to PROTECT their people. Not be RICH and have the most luxurious life. No! I protect and do whats best for my fellow Atlanteans! And I failed... to do... that...
King Of Atlantis: heheh...Hahaa...Hahaha! HAHAHAHAHA!
King Of Atlantis...?: NEMRACT WANTS NOTHING MORE THAN TO NOT BE A POOR LITTLE CITY! SO THEY RESORT TO KILLING US?
King Of Atlantis...?: WAS THIS ALL JUST A FLUKE? HAS THE RUMOR BEEN A LIE? HAVE THEY JUST BEEN DOING THIS OUT OF JEALOUSY?
King Of Atlantis...?: I MEAN, IF THEY WERE KILLING OUR ATLANTEANS FOR FOOD, THE FOOD CRISIS WOULD BE DIMINISHED! BUT ITS STILL GOING ON... WE WERE A THRIVING CITY, AND THEY WERENT! IT MAKES SENSE!
King Of Atlantis...?: THEY WERE DOING THIS FROM JEALOUSY! HAHAHA! AND NOW, WE WILL SHOW NEMRACT OUR RETALIATION! OUR RICHES! OUR TREASURE! OUR POWER!!
King OF Atlantis...?: AND MY FIRST STEP... WILL BE TO KILL YOU. -replaces crown gem with emerald, emerald glows corruption colors-
Corrupted King Of Atlantis: NOW! I WILL SHOW YOU THE POWER... OF EMERALDS! TO DESTROY!!
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Stage 6: Slay the Corrupted King Of Atlantis.

Stage 7: Talk to Moris.

Moris: Oh hey! You came back! Have you gotten any proo-
Moris: OH GOODNESS!! DID YOU JUST... SONNY!! I wanted a piece of Atlantean bricks! Not... Severed fins!! Ugh... now i can never relive my childhood...
Moris: Anyway, thank you for your help... I guess...? So now i still now it exists. Anyway, imma' just put on my diver suit, and I'll be gettin' my own evidence! See ya later sonny!
Moris: Oh, im such a dingus! Have all of m- I mean, uhh, because you killed that poor creature, i'll just give you... half my wallet... Anyway! Goodbye! Heheheh! Atlantis, Here i come!!

Quest Rewards:
900 emeralds/SPOILER]

EDIT: Maybe some feedback from a GM? That could help. Criticism is needed for improvements. Even though this is a bit unoriginal, do I still have a chance of acceptance?

 

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