Music My Masterpiece (as Of Now): Sanctuary Of The Skies

hey so i've made a song for quest idea i'm making and i wanted your thoughts on it

i think so far this is my best song though

and tips or feedback would be greatly appreciated :)

 

I like what you have so far- my suggestion would be to make sure you have a secondary melody that would be in the song as you get further in. Something that adds onto or builds off of the three note ostinado you have.

 

updated preview, extended to 37 seconds, and reworked what i originally had a little bit. thanks for the feedback so far!

 

Nice fam,
I still agree with the first comment still but its really good so far

 

song is now finished

 

Time to tag @Torrential Tide for you.

 

Well, you made this a pretty darn good song! Love the way you managed to add in multiple different parts so it's not so repetitive.

 

Hey look, it's an actually good song, one that's not stolen (like some recent one's I've seen)...
A few things I would recommend:
Create a new layer and place the notes that overlap there at 40% volume, so they aren't blaring at 200%.
Maybe remove 1-3 double bass notes somewhere in between 0:30-0:36, just seems like there should be a slight pause in there

guud werk

OH WAIT, I NECROED



FUCK

 

hey its not actually a necro, and either way i greatly appreciate the feedback
thanks!
this is my third song so far, so yeah there is some stuff i need to work on.