Music Onward! To The Top! (original Music Arrangement, Wip)

You know how I have been making covers for some Wynncraft songs for some time?

Those were practice runs. Now to finally put two and two together and try to compose a song that is actually original. Except this song definitely does not fit the Wynncraft Theme at all.
Oh well, if I make an adventure map someday at least I have a pretty cool piece of music that I can use.



I have tried composing music before, but those usually end up terribly. No kidding. This is my 4th attempt at making something good (1st and 2nd attempts was when I first got Musescore, 3rd and 4th attempts was after arranging Wynncraft Music Covers for some time, which also had a pretty cool thing going on but was hard to work with), and I have to be doing something right this time. Nevertheless, it is pretty hard.

Honestly, I haven't taken much music lessons (I am mostly self taught), but I have taken what I learnt from making Wynncraft song covers, and trying to improvise a bit on the piano... I ended up with a rhythm that I liked, although I have a feeling it does sound a bit weird at some parts.

I might continue it, I might not. Don't know. Most likely I will, we shall see.

EDIT: I have a few goals for this music piece. I want it to:

1. Not be too repetitive.
2. Have a Bridge or "a cooler part than the actual cool part".
3. Learn how to use chords with this piece of music.
4. Sound awesome

Hopefully with the guidance of the community I will get there.

 

not bad!
Quite good actually

 

Pretty catchy melody, and the percussions sounds just fine, maybe turn down the volume on the snare a little.
My only real advice to give is maybe put in one or two notes leading up to measure nine. Just a quick G-A- run to proceed the B would be a good idea, although maybe I am being too picky.
Keep up the good work!

 

It sounds nice but maybe the drums are a little too complex. I know that sounds weird but if you're going for this wynncrafty kinda style it sounds better to have it very simple or not at all. Also the start of them melody sounds kinda odd.