Build What Do You Think Of This Build? 6

Shoutout to @CookedPelvis for telling me to do this to qualify for the build team!

Hello, its me again, Moldavite. So recently I built a town called Dolmetiva, and posted it. Check it out here if you missed it. https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/what-do-you-think-of-this-build-5-5.214218/ But anyway on that post, CookedPelvis told me that you should add terrain, blah blah blah (what nearly everyone said) but what caught my eye is that i must try and show off all types of terrain/biomes to qualify. The first thing i built was a swamp. Anything to say? Anything you like? As the thread's name suggests, what do YOU think about this build?

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second part:

 

The house interior is a meh, it's a little detail-less. The trees are also meh. The house roof is a meh, bbbuuttttt the terrain is very well done. ( No , seriously the terrain is DOPPPPEEEE

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If it's the terrain your focusing on, 4.8 stars out of 5 :D

 

Overall, im aiming for everything. And my sole job here was trying to make them all balanced, but props to you for pointing out my flaws. I will definetly remember that for next time.

 

BTW, To make the interior and the exterior more "Wynncrafty" Just spam Chests, crafting Tables and pistons, planks everywhere (oh and pots, the stuff Wynncraft spams around).
No seriously if you watch Wynncraft videos or play the game you will notice this :D

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I'm not super skilled builder but I like to think I have some artistic impression :D

 

No! This is a big mistake a lot of builders make when they are not very experienced. While Wynncraft does have some spammy builds, these are from years ago. I know a lot of builders on the team hate detail spamming, and it looks much better to have a clean, pleasant interior.

Personally, your interior looks fine as it is.

@Moldavite I am glad you were inspired to build in a different style, but now some feedback:

• Bright colors on house roofs should be used sparingly, and generally only on silly or crazy builds. It seems very unnatural.
• Include some smaller swamp trees.
• Keep practicing terraining! Try making larger scale terrain using bigger brushes and interesting terrain features.

I am going to include a short video that could help you.

 

Looks pretty good! I would just make the terrain a little bit flatter in a swamp, but since this is a small build I can see why you did it the way you did. Also, the little shack lacks detail and I don't recommend using concrete blocks for a roof because they are too bright and plain (especially in a swamp).

 

I agree with you the spammyness looks bad ;I Sorry
But, The interiours center feels a little..... How do I say it... Empty?, Feels un-lived-in, un-loved, because it's a marsh/swamp the inside should be a little more "wet" or "broken", because you accosiate swamps with decay. That is what it is actually missing.
(P.S I'm sorry CookedPelvis, I'm not really a very good builder, I'm more of a artist or a baker or a juggler, not really a minecraft builder, but I do have like, 5 seconds of experience.)

 

Terraforming looks nice, don’t make it flatter. I would maybe scale the build larger next time, but as you are somewhat new this looks really nice :). As for the interior, don’t spam details. However, I agree it feels a bit empty. Consider adding a small centerpiece like a table or something else

 

I like it generally, and I actually agree with both CookedPelvis and Reefive. It's good that you didn't spam the house, but it seems a little empty. Maybe you can add one or two noteblock cubes to at least make it seem like occupied.

I like the terrain but it could use more lakes, maybe little ones rather than big ones (since you went for kind of little terrain work)