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Build What Do You Think Of This Build? 4

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Moldavite, Dec 19, 2017.

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  1. Moldavite

    Moldavite help

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    Hi, its me, Moldavite.

    Today, i tried my first ever shot at terrain with the WorldEdit and VoxelSniper plugins. Feel free to criticize, its my only way of advancing my build skill. Anyway, here are the images: 2017-12-19_18.29.52.png 2017-12-19_18.34.36.png 2017-12-19_18.35.05.png 2017-12-19_18.35.51.png
     
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  2. Rawb

    Rawb Disciple of Bak'al

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    Looks pretty good, but the green stuff at the edges cladhes too much with the grass. Maybe remove the lime or change the biome? Other than that looks like a pretty decent build.
     
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  3. Kubabali

    Kubabali Well-Known Adventurer

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    looks pretty good, maybe chill on the variety of flowers. Also, at the bottom of the "cliff" try to make it steeper and more natural. @necroRawb 's comment is very helpful as well.
     
  4. GoodNermss

    GoodNermss Your friendly neighborhood robot

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    I've hated the terracotta blocks since they were introduced, but they look tolerable in your build. Sorry, I just have a terrible bias against them. Everything else looks solid tho.
     
  5. HalfCat_

    HalfCat_ Supporter of Catania GM Builder

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    I don't really like the palette but other than that it's pretty good.
     
  6. Mekyr

    Mekyr Warden of Rymek Canyon

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    I think that this build was most likely created on your computer using the variety of 1x1 meter blocks available in the videogame called "Minecraft". It was clearly based off of exaggerated-reality / fantasy depictions of what might be considered an atypical landscape. There are features suggesting an awareness of the existence of plant-life which would perhaps inhabit such a landscape, including but not limited to grasses and trees. The large mushroom-like object in the background is indicative of what could be a version of reality in which some normally very small objects are made to be far bigger in scale; however, this is clearly not always the case considering the grasses present on the top of the landscape structure appear to be of normal size.

    I rate your creation

    d̴̫̼̤͍̻͚̦͓̙͔̥̟̬̈͛̈̎͋͂̆̏̈̚f̸̡̛̲̗͎͔̮̙̠̉̒̋̒̓́̓͛̚̚͠͝a̶̡̦̜̪͇̦͌́͋̃̂ḓ̶͓̯̗̹͓̑̂̍ä̴͖̩̰̙́̈̌ą̶̛̗͇̤͇͉̪̪̺̗͎̊͂̇̃͛͐́̇̓̕d̷̡͙͖̻̮̀̏͆̎͑͑͌̈f̵̪̲̥̣̖͕̊͂̋̃̀̓̂̓́̍̕


    out of 10
     
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  7. Sonick

    Sonick Post Anarcho-Eco-Fascist Anti-Centrist

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    Juicy Review
     
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  8. Moldavite

    Moldavite help

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    Shout-out to @Mekyr for rating my build dfadaadf/10!
     
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  9. valvoid

    valvoid Build/CMD Hybrid HERO

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    Looks nice, couple comments: I think maybe your tree is a bit bare. Add some more leaves to it, and some more branches. Also, maybe around the edges use grasses, dirts and leaves rather than the concrete. Terraforming is nice though :)
     
  10. robincaiye

    robincaiye ♧ the local (broke) emerald dealer HERO

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    looks like you also did yahya's new house

    gg/10
     
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