Music Fanmade Track

So while my wifi was out yesterday I decided to make this with all the spare time I had, I would like to see what you guys think (also when critisizing remember that I'm fairly new to composing music)

You can find it HERE:

 

Nice track! some of my only criticism is that [yes I know your new at this] The track is a bit.... boring? [pls no kill me]

You have the constant dun dun dun dun and the occasional [well main] chord, thats good! the chords sound nice, which is a really great feat! Making good chords is hard! however adding Layers or some thing to the track would be nice, currently you have like the bass or something in the background, and the chords, but adding some smaller melodies into it would be nice, for example

[Qira theme]
You can hear
The background Bass,
the dun dun dun dun

and the chords as well dun dun dun

But ADDITIONALLY there is also a main melody of some sort which keeps the track vibrant and exciting

Now I understand your new and I really have no right to judge you, and that the Qira piece is a really high quality wynn song, but thats just my take on it <3

 

while yes, the main theme of the song was supposed to be kind of gloomy, I do appreciate the criticism.

 

Now, I know you can't do much in this program you use just by looking at it, but my best advice is to use multiple chords and add some variation to the track, if you know music theory, which is basically keys and chords (like C Major), you should have an easy time doing this, but if you don't, just look up an explanation of chords and stuff, now granted, I know this is a fan-made track, and mind you its rather good. But keep in mind that people have a really short attention span, especially in this day of age, so add some variation and you will be good. Sounds great!

 

Tbh I don't like this, but I am still confident you'll do better next time you decide to make a track.