Art Homestuck - Nepeta (jacketless)

I drew this about a week and a half ago, though I've been so busy that colouring it took much longer than it should have. I wanted to draw Nepeta without her signature olive-green jacket on for once, and I think it turned out quite well!

Spoiler: Grayscale/Sketch Version

Spoiler: Coloured Version

Spoiler: Reference Image Used

 

first ones pretty good
second one looks kinda wwonky around the head
also this

 

Yeah...that part's always been a little problematic for me. I'm working on getting better!

 

Its good, but I think i bit more work on positioning the hair would make it so her hair doesnt stick far out.

/critic

 

im seeing breasts or something
but the reference picture looks flat af...?
also why did i expect it half naked while screaming in a pile of something?

heh
help

 

Technically speaking, trolls don't really have easily visible breasts within the normal canon of Homestuck (see fig. 1), though a lot of artwork I've seen do include some kind of reference to them to show some difference between a Male/Female. I decided to just show the sort of lines that would indicate them as to better show Nepeta's body shape.

Fig. 1