Build Halloween Build

Hey Wynncraft users and Wynncraft team!
I wantet to show you a build for a server me and my team recently build.
It is a Halloween hub playersize.
I hope you like it
This is a small part of the hub, if you want to check it out by yourself you can join the server timolia.de,
but it is a german server.
This is not supposed to be a advertisement, I just wanted to share it ^^

 

spooped

 

@shamos200 What xD? http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=spoop?

 

It feels a bit messy and cluttered in my opinion. The separate pieces are nice, but there's a little bit too much going on; so much that you lose the really cool stuff in it.
Regardless, cool cool; the witch is nice. Who made her?

 

I know that it seems a bit messy but this is supposed to be a hub, it has to be interesting. @PearlescentMoon

 

Interesting doesn't mean messy. From my personal perspective, as a player in that hub, I would feel overwhelmed, not know what to look at, and I'd just not bother. This is my feedback, and it's up to you whether you take it. I've seen many hubs with a nice simplicity/layout design that compliments the builds included within. If you want to include more items, then make a layout that works with what you're making. My viewpoint is that too many things are crammed in one space; make it bigger, spread things out more, and it'll be much nicer. The palette should relate to that, and remain consistent throughout.

Maybe it's not actually cluttered, and the issue is the palette. It's either or, and that's how I'm looking at it.

 

I love this build yo, props.
I think you should remove the witch because it's too scary! When I saw it I screamed and dropped my iPad mini in the fucking ocean

 

@PearlescentMoon No offense, thank you for your feedback, i didn't want to criticize your commend. I know that there are awesome builds, that are simple, not mutch detail but good placed (See Pixelbiester )

 

The builds separately look kwl, but the exposed log ends trigger me. IMO it would look nicer with more complementary pallets, or a more organised split of contrasting pallets.

 

What you linked there is a better example of a lobby. The palette is consistent, and there's enough space between everything so it's not crammed. Always liked Pixelbiester.