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Art Gfx Banner For Crispguy!

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Krase, Apr 16, 2017.

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  1. Krase

    Krase Digital Artist VIP+

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    Made a graphics (GFX) banner for a friend! Go check it out!

    Please note that I do not make these for free.
     
  2. InactiveAccount

    InactiveAccount Owl-Whisperer

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    Hello hello - two suggestions.

    -The perspective on "CRISP" makes the word seem to go to a vanishing point instead of staying consistent on a linear horizon line. So instead of having it get smaller towards the end, try having it so the letters are even throughout the entire name.
    -Some of the effects look overdone, such as the character's glowing eyes, the glint on the sword, and specifically the fire. I sped your video down to 0.25 speed and saw that your folder with the fire, "Fire/Flames", could easily have been taken from online (hopefully royalty free). I trust your abilities of course and won't undermine your process but perhaps showing in the video you doing the fire can help. I'm sure you're aware, but under Filter > Render > Flame you can make realistic fire (and 30+ types of trees, along with: frames, clouds and a bit more).

    Maybe this helped, maybe it did not; but I would suggest trying this for your next render work. Best of wishes.
     
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