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Post An Essay, With 3 Reasons Based On This Prompt

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  1. orange0404

    orange0404 corkus is actually here HERO

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    Many professional athletes and entertainers earn large sums of money. Do you agree or disagree

    with these individuals making high salaries? Use specific details and examples to convince others

    to support your position.

    This prompt is SO BS
    PLS HELP
     
  2. sorae

    sorae drifting VIP

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    they do a job
    they work hard
    they do what they like to

    yes it's justified that they make money
    the only problem is them not contributing to society, but that's a whole other argument

    if you want sources just use this totally reliable post made by a 14 year old who doesn't know that much about anything outside his chair
     
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  3. Endertricity

    Endertricity Assorted Mini Quiche VIP

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    Do you personally agree or disagree? I can go from there
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    @"Jamieverse" help me help you answer that
     
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  4. orange0404

    orange0404 corkus is actually here HERO

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    Well what about donald trump
    He got a big head start
    Starting from the ground up is hard
    "A small loan of 1 million dolla bills"
     
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    Endertricity Assorted Mini Quiche VIP

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    Maybe you should ask your teacher if you can very slightly change the question: are athletes beneficial to the country in any way? It makes it so much easier

    Introduction (you can figure out how to do this by yourself, I suck too so no help there)
    Now, your thesis statement
    This is for the argument that athletes are good (even tho I hate sports)

    1) Important icons of communities
    - Sports teams, or individual athletes, are representatives. They could represent a country (Olympics) or just a city (football or something).
    - Representatives in competitions are important in bringing together a coherent community, so that people find solace in supporting the same thing as their neighbors for a fairly innocent cause
    - Maybe you could cite the expansion of common culture in the 1920s when popular icons were spreading across America. It helped greatly in uniting the nation under a common cause (albeit a seemingly superficial one).

    2) Athletes generate income
    - During Super Bowl season, almost HALF THE ENTIRE COUNTRY watches the game.
    - Obviously, this generates huge revenue for the entertainment industries associated with the Super Bowl, not to mention advertisements, commercials, ticketing, merchandising...
    - Doesn't it make sense that some of the money flows back to the people who can make all of this something to actually watch, the players?

    I'll leave you to find a third one on your own, because I can't really think of one...

    Finally, a conclusion.
    hope you found it useful
     
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  6. qqcora

    qqcora Professsional mythical pokemon :3 CHAMPION

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    i barely do my own homework idk how u have time to think about other ppls hw
     
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