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Lore/Story Self Explanatory. (unofficial, Just Me Rambling About.)

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  1. orange0404

    orange0404 corkus is actually here HERO

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    Prologue, Scroll Down a Bit. Personally think its horrible.

    Chapter One, Fallen Brethren:
    https://forums.wynncraft.com/thread...l-just-me-rambling-about.153720/#post-1726479

    Chapter Two, Wandering Through: https://forums.wynncraft.com/thread...l-just-me-rambling-about.153720/#post-1736820


    Chapter Three, coming soon, probably will be the longest one yet.








    Prologue​

    Where do we begin... ah... it's a sunny day in the morning of Fruma... as our recruits be probably one of their most memorable journeys throughout the hills and valleys of Wynn. As he readies himself for something much bigger than him. As the caravan driver shouts,

    "Well ain't shocked 'bout this... seems like our journey will have to end here"

    "Really! I thought we would continue all the way to Ragni."

    "Well Yabba Dabba Doo, seems like you finally decided to wake up."

    "Knurlnien! How are you able to stay asleep! I was awake the whole time!"

    "Come on, we don't want to keep him waiting. He very rarely gets new recruits."

    He rolls his shoulder, starts cracking his knuckles, and starts realizing he is in a huge valley that is enclosing the gates between Fruma and Wynn. The moon shines brightly, floating in the rippled puddle in front of the caravan. The horses yelp as their legs are extremely tired and stiff due to the long journey. The dwarf scolds the human, as he was not very experienced with combat.

    "Orik, would you mind if you could kill some Grooks for us?"

    "Hey! Do not treat animals so lightly. They have lives as well, and they do not randomly murder us intelligent beings. We will only kill if necessary."

    "Däthedr, wise you may be, but there may be challenges up ahead, I prefer we be fed rather then us starve."

    The group decides to navigate ahead, hurrying as if they are hungry for more action. They run into a cave full of zombies, as the soldiers warn them to get out immediately.

    "Y'all over there, run immediately through this tunnel, I will accompany you. The King is waiting for the next group of adventurers!"

    "We understand."

    The situation must be dire, as the King of Troms and Ragni clearly have a humongous force, thought one of the recruits.

    "The King is waiting for you!"

    They marvel at the humongous plateau that envelopes them, and enter the legendary Wynn Province.
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    This is just a quick preview of what I could do. If you would like me to continue vote above.
     
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  2. orange0404

    orange0404 corkus is actually here HERO

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    "It's very nice to see you! I hope you didn't cut yourself on your way here, you may eat to your hearts content, as of now, we will have much to discuss."

    Orik very gladly accepts the food and begins to devour everything that is edible. As the blaring sun starts to rise, Däthedr, a very skilled Huntsman, decides to meditate outside, as he had been prepared to eat. The recruits decide to fall asleep in the safety of Ragni. The hardy leather helmet they recieved during the trip was pratically useless, so they sold it to a merchant for a small amount of emeralds. The humans decide to take a walk outside, and run into a peculiar tunnel right next to the castle. They decide to explore it, even with its disgusting stench. Killing rats along the way, they hear an eerie sound, most likely caused by a human. To their surprise, this human turns out to be a zombie! It starts lobbing an unusual gelatinous like item at them, oozing the skin off of one of them. She casts a spell, immediately mending the flesh together, however she loses a lot of her strength. The other jumps on the chance and slices its head off, carefully examining and taking the gelatinous object. They decide to go back, and take a nap as well. Absolute silence. The morning comes, and the new recruits are very lethargic, dragging their feet down the stairs. Suddenly, a magical voice talks to all the recruits. Everyone, the Kingdom of Ragni will be under attack! All new recruits please retreat to Troms! You will be assisted immediately by an unusual adventurer.

    "By the gods, what the heck is going on! I wake up to hear a wizard examine my mind without my permission!"

    "Orik, it seems like it was some spell immediately notifying everyone in this world. Who knows what will be happening."

    An adventurer barges in with an unusual purple-like crystalline set of armor enters.

    "Everyone, we will be evacuating to Trom immediately. Please be patient. The horde of zombies seem to be coming from the Emerald Trail. I will be escorting all through the Pigman Ravines and back."

    Everyone starts to run out and group with the adventurer, as they run through the Pigman Ravines.

    "Who do you think you are trying to pass through here! I will be sentencing you to DEATH!"

    The adventurer, runs up and kicks the captain in the air. With amazing speed, he twists and turns midair around the captain, slicing him multiple times in the progress. The Pigman Captain's flesh drops down onto the ground, like a sack of butter.

    "Excuse me, but what is that set of armor you are wearing?"

    "Ahh, you must be asking about this. I got it from an unusual man living in a radiating meteor. Of course, it was extremely dangerous, however the local wizard put wards on us blocking the radiation. The man located inside seems to have gone insane, his name Mehme. I found it inside the Province of Gavel, an extremely dangerous province filled with insane monsters such as Gnomes, Dwarves, Elfs, Orcs, you name it!"

    "Dwarves and Elfs you say! I thought they lived only in Fruma!"

    "That is a story for another time, that only they know that are currently living in Gavel. Heard they migrated through the mountains, it was a treacherous journey, and in the end, only a couple survived."

    "I've heard of this tale, but I never thought it was true. The elves may be fast but after they crossed the Divide, but we were not able to contact them anymore."

    The group runs on, realizing that they are at the bottom of the ravine, where most of the pigmen lay. He runs up, throwing some smoke bombs, and slicing all in his path.

    "Hey y'all there! Stop where you are!"

    "Do not worry, they are under my influence, I will make sure they do not cause any trouble."

    "Alright, you may pass through."

    They enter the peculiar tunnel, lined with flames, allowing the group to see where they are going.

    "Wirt! It has been a long time since I have seen you little one. How is it going?"

    "Lots of more adventurers have arrived, and my father has changed the way you get membership, due to the large hordes of people, anyway, welcome to Troms, the home to many legends of Wynn."

    "Hey, do you happen to know what this is?"

    The young human pulls out the gelatinous object, as the crowd bellows in astonishment.

    "Oh my, that is Bob's Tear! He was one of the legends of Wynn, but now he curses residents of Ragni, turning them into zombies one at a time."

    "Hey, I recommend you keep that for now. You might need that later on in the future."

    He runs straight down the stairs into the bank, using it to store Bob's Tear. He looks outside to see all the Dead Miners grouping up and going into the cave. He strays away realizing the horrors of Wynn, and why they need more recruits so badly.

    "Alright, let me tell you a story. Bob, who was known as Robert formally, was a legendary hero of the Temple of Legends, who scaled the Tower of Ascension, defended many cities from swarms, and taught many how to use all weapons. I was fortunate enough to see him as a child, but he died soon afterwards, being chowed down by wolves. He had 3 animals. Mooington, Cluckles, and Ba'ab. They were his companions. They travelled all across Wynn and the Ocean, defending the innocent everywhere. Hell, he even took down Death himself during the final floor. He was the keystone of the Wynn/Gavel alliance, and his name will be remembered throughout the world."

    They marvel at the story, and go around talking to citizens, wondering how this came to be. The sun goes down, as they take a nap inside the hospitality of the Kingdom of Troms.

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    orange0404 corkus is actually here HERO

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    Might as well. Feel Free to post here. Decent amount of names I got from another book. Read the Inheritance Series. Best Series I ever read, and Never will Regret it. I'll be honest right now, the prologue I made was super crappy.
     
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    Reminds me of an fanstays story about a dragon girl I once made
     
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    The group returns back to Ragni with haste in about 15 minutes, surprisingly fast due to the fact that more Pigman had arrived. The group runs quickly along the Emerald Trail, however they run into Enzan along the way to the entrance of Nivla Forest.

    "Hello there! D'you mind if you could go check on my brother?" He asked in a questionable voice.

    "No problem, where would he be at the moment?" said Däthedr with a cautious tone.

    "He is at the entrance of Nivla Forest, I bet he will reward you dearly if you help him out,"

    "Then let us make way there, as patience does not last very long in most animate beings,"

    "Thank you, you have my gratitude and respect,"

    The group hurries on, slicing and dicing any zombies that come in their path. They pick up a couple potions along the way, from a questionable villager with an unusual basement, but none the less they needed them. They found his brother, Therck, with a powder merchant, as if they are waiting for someone.

    "Hello there, it seems like your brother wanted us to check on you, and we are glad that you are okay,"

    "Blast that bastardly fool, he keeps sending on recruits from Ragni to come talk to me, and they keep expecting powder from me."

    "Well, sorry for interrupting you then. We will inform Enzan of this to not send recruits to you,"

    "No, it is fine, as I should say that Powders are a very important element to your weapon. They can build up energy and release a unique spell, each that can be found in the Powder Guide Handbook,"

    "Thank you for informing us about this information, we should get going and hurry on to Detlas,"

    "Before you go, take this note from me and use it to buy a free Tier 1 Powder from the merchant just across. Pick wisely as it will be attuned to your weapon and removing it can be very tiring or expensive for a powder master."

    "We should get going, Zack,"

    Each of them grab a note from Therck, and use it to buy their own type of powder. They venture through the woods, being wary of the spiders that have been told to have slain 100 men in a single day. They hike through it all, running into a Junk Merchant and a Powder Master along the way. Hurrying, they see the ruins of a house, regular ruins, withered trees, and so on and so forth. Trekking through was extremely tough, and the group decided to take a quick rest along a destroyed town on their way to Detlas. They are suprised by a dead VIP Member who strikes in the middle of silence.

    "Woah! Try hitting me if you can!" She yelled to the Ancient, Dead VIP Member.

    The VIP Member's arm begins to rapidly move, allowing her to fire more shots than ever in a short amount of time. From there, Zack slashes it in half, allowing them to continue their journey into Detlas.

    They marvel at the giant stone walls, thinking of how anyone could have infiltrated the city, as it was a prominent place for trade, as it had been connected to Cinfras with the Airship Service. Finally, they walked through the gate, and brightness filled their eyes, as they entered the Center of the Wynn Province, Detlas.
     
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