Build A Build I Made

tell me what you think :)
http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/a-fortress/

 

I can't really get too much from that screenshot; but I feel like the terrain around could use some work to compliment it more. :) Nice work.

 

Add more screens on pmc with shaders and with a render, if you know what is it.
well, the structure is terrible, because you used 2 blocks and it's not good. To make a cool shape you have to add more and more blocks "white" to make a lot of shapes.
Try to do less details, but really cool details. Another thing, terraforming is really bad. You can't use /b over d1 for all. Try to make a form with balls and smooth it to create the best form. For the palette of the terrain you have to make a color like the real terrain, using the shades of color you want.
good luck and have fun ;D

 

There is a download link you know

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Plz....

I don't use voxel sniper btw

 

anyway, I hope I was helpful ;)

 

Thx for the judgement... But try to be a bit less critical, I'm not the best builder and this is just something I made for fun not to be serious

 

oh ok sorry x), I said what was wrong to let you improve, but no problem ;)

 

jeez, you really are a harsh one

 

ahah thanks ;I

 

You can't ask someone not to critical if you're asking for fees back, you'll never improve

 

I think it's more 'Don't be insulting' than 'don't be critical'.

 

^spot on

 

The style feels old and repetitive, repetitive can be good, but it's to simple, This build feels like it was made in 2012. And the fact that it is big does not save it. So give it a more complex design, maybe a little bit more detail, and try added some more colors.

 

if you spend this long just to be hateful, you must have a boring life

 

Thx for the feedback

How is made in 2012?

Where exactly does it need to be complex?

 

by 2012 I mean it looks like it was made in 2012. And by complex I mean that the shapes of the pillars and the form of the build in to simple.

 

I'm not hateful, I want only to improve all aspirant builder with simple advices..

 

If you still don't know what I mean by complex here is a small example of what I mean. It just has a little bit more detail and is less blocky, which I know is ironic because it's Minecraft.

 

Looks like llevigar