Music Creek Dance - Minecraft Noteblocks

This is my very first custom song, I hope you like it.

@XavierEXE What do you think?

I give this a 3/5, for a first song

 

coo

 

Coo to you too

 

coo coo

 

its a good first try. Some tips: seriously add a melody. A repeating bass that ramps up super slowly does not sound that great. It would sound a lot better if you had a bass that supported and led up to your melody.

All being said, it's a nice start for your first piece

 

This is making me dizzy, take away the double blue note thing, cuz when they are put together, they make the song really off tune. The beginning was lit but once more notes came in, it started to go wierd. Still awesome for your first song doe, i wanna try noteblock music now lol

 

Ok, I'll test it out

 

That's called dissonance, not sure if it's intended, but it sure creates a heck of a lot of it.

 

Just to clarify, the one at the ending with the ascending notes, or the center one with the double notes?

 

I apologize, dam its hard to make music xD this is way better than what i can do for my first.
Its prob not those notes, i think its making me think that because the beat is always repeating and never changes,which makes me dizzy.

 

Yeah, right now I'm trying to make the actual 'song' part, and not a really long intro