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More Work For My Application

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by tjmoore04, Aug 21, 2016.

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    Please leave suggestions. I really appreciate them.
     
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    OrientGamer Veteran Writer - Artist - OG memer - Doge VIP

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    Eh, much better than the average minecraft builder, but not quite the level Wynncraft is looking for.

    Nice job nonetheless, and I would suggest looking at the builds in-game for the level of quality that the team needs :)

    You could also watch some of Grian senpai's build videos on his channel (https://www.youtube.com/user/Xelqua), if you can build at that quality without reference builds, then you have a good shot. You could also try making larger and more detailed builds, to show off more of your skill!
     
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    Thx for the feedback OrientGamer
     
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    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    Pretty cool, though I recommend adding a bit more to the terrain. Currently it's just flat, but try to add some ups and downs, making it look more natural ;)
     
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    Thx for the feedback Jameverse I'll try to implement some terraforming into build that I'll be posting.
     
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    Thane 360 build scoped

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    Aside from Terrain, I like it. Though the blending of the wood could use a little bit of work, all-n-all it would affect the atmosphere of the build. I like it, however just a recommendation, before you apply, kind of explore the forums and get to know people. :) Nice work though.
     
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    DirtyDoge Master Procastinator HERO

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    Too bland, it's not super aesthetically pleasing too look at a pathway that's mostly flat made up of one block. Use a variety of different blocks.
     
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    Thx for the feedback Thane.
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    I actually fixed the path a bit right after I posted the pictures for some reason. But thx for the feedback anyways DirtyDoge
     
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