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Hey guys! Here Is a thread where all of the machinmas made by my amazing team go! Here are the videos so far...

 

Your Work
EDIT: Somebody moved thread :D

 

okay, here's my feedback.

1. You could honestly do with better editing software. the dialogue looks so bland compared to that of MachinimaRealm, ExplodingTNT or CraftedMovie.
2. You keep moving the camera so much. It's hard to tell whats going on with you keep moving the camera.

 

Yea.....I thought about the camera thing too. It's because my cinematic camera is on....so, the camera moves like it is moving on ice....after I move the camera and stop my mouse in place, it keeps goin for a few secs, so, next video I will turn that off.
And for the editing program...is there any program you reccomend? Which Is the best editing program? (Btw the program..it has to be something free)

 

Wow. Im really proud of this one.

 

Just a suggestion, can you remove those ads on the top right and bottom left by any chance? It only makes it look worse.

 

You need to stop shaking the screen, it looks extremely unprofessional.

 

Well....How else can i tell the actor to go?

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I shake the screen cuz im nodding,

 

Well, you're using F1, right?
So keep an item in your hotbar, and when he needs to go, hold it.

 

Oh yea...Thx! I'll do that next video...Which is a BIG and I mean HUGE VIDEO, it features CraftedMovie, ExplodingTNT. Failboat, and Pink sheep!

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No, sadly I cannot...unless I use a different software...and you know what? I will.

 

Not sure how your gonna pull that off without seeming like a copycat or an idiot, but I guess I'll see.

 

You will see....

 

Okay...so I decided to get more experience before making a huge video like that, and I made a video where I go insane! And I try to kill zomb with a wood hoe!

 

try and make different scenes and not just follow the actor around. tnt, craftmovie and stuff don't follow their actor, they stand in a position and record that, then they edit it


also I recommend using Open Broadcaster Software and Windows Movie Maker instead of screencast.

 

My suggestions:
Instead of moving the "camera" (player) a lot use jump cuts.

Get rid of the water marks. Use other programs. If you don't wanna pay you can always get a cracked version.

The video should be at 720p instead of 480p. (it looks better and you can see stuff crearly). Edit: I've seen some of your vidseos are actually in 720p, and they look better

You should have a story in your viseos. Try writing a simple story before making the video.

 

I just watched 40 seconds of a hoe going partially into a zombie. Interesting.

 

I do have a story...its where I go crazy and try to kill my enemy Zomb with a wood hoe.

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What in the world are jump cuts?

 

Jump cuts are cuts in the editing that's just a hop from one place to another.
So say you look at the actor going into the ruins. Next frame, the camera is suddenly in a different perspective. That's a jump cut.

 

Oh thx for the idea! That is amazing! I will do that.