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Build Cute House.

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by JewelXSparkle, Jun 25, 2016.

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How well was this built :D

  1. 5/5 (WCT)

    5 vote(s)
    17.9%
  2. 4/5 (skilled builder)

    11 vote(s)
    39.3%
  3. 3/5 (General/ it needs work)

    10 vote(s)
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  4. 2/5 (Might need to rebuild parts of it...)

    2 vote(s)
    7.1%
  5. 1/5 (this is horrible :D)

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  6. 0/5 (ur a disgrace)

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  1. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    I really didn't want to make terrain because i wanted people to focus on the house, but it looks way better with terrain... so i couldn't help myself and made all the terrain :D

    http://imgur.com/a/8IEun
    ScreenShots^^^

    also please tell me how i can improve :D (i need improving.)

    also, this is a plot server, and there are weird builds in the back...
     
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  2. Air_Locke_

    Air_Locke_ im a water bottle HERO

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    i like that cat ass in the last picture
     
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  3. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    woah.. some1 said 5/5 heck yas.
     
  4. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    Bumping this because I want feedback and ratings. PLEASE'


    c'mon, write something... not about the cat butt i_i
     
    Last edited: Jul 6, 2016
  5. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    for god sake freaking give feedback!!!!!
     
  6. Flubby

    Flubby left and accidentally became leftist VIP+

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    Shaping feels off. Idk how, but it's weird.

    Nice build though.
     
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  7. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    *clears throat* I'm ten years old and i made this... now comment XD
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    ty, and if u figure out how this shaping is weird, tell me :3
     
  8. PearlescentMoon

    PearlescentMoon Proud Block Placer Slave VIP

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    If anything is off about the shape, it would be the roof. It has a large 'base' but flattens greatly on the topmost part of the roof, resulting in a 'box' shape feel. The thing is, it could be your own kind of style to have that kind of roof, so it's entirely up to you what you do with it and reasonable in both contexts.

    As for the terrain, I still feel like it's immensely flat, but it could just be my perspective and whatnot. Also, try to steer away from vanilla flowers on the ground. It makes it look a bit cheap.

    Overall though, it's a nice build. Keep up the good work.
     
  9. child

    child Content team wannabe 2k 16 i cri

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    walls are very plain where shape
     
  10. AndriX3S

    AndriX3S \\☢☣ Jägermeister ☣☢// VIP

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    Love the roof but the blue walls... idk, anyways nice build!
     
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