Build Emburk City's Grand Bank

So on a build server, I decided to build something I now call my Magnum Opus (Great Work). And that said build, is Emburk City's Grand Bank.

Here is the frontal view of the build at night.

As you can see you can tell that it's a Bank because it has an Emerald symbol on the front of it.


A birds eye view of the Bank.


The side view of the Bank.

Now let's go into the bank itself
The Bank is comprised of 3 levels. The first level is where the actual bank is. The second level is the lobby for those entering the side door. and the 3rd is where the Emerald storage is.

FIRST LEVEL

A screenshot of the actual bank part of the build.

SECOND LEVEL

The lobby part of the build for those entering through the side entrance.

THIRD LEVEL

The first part of the 3rd floor is a locked gate that requires a key to open the door. And if you open the door this is what you will be looking at.

A place with lots of Emeralds and some crates.

But anyways, that's my Magnum Opus. I hope you liked it!

 

The cyan clay wall needs more detail.

 

I think it's really nice!

 

Wonderful! It's detailed and all, yet not overdetailed, again I say wonderful :D

 

Looks nice! Maybe just a tad bit more detail to the walls

 

Roofing is pretty good, where you go wrong is your block palette also complete your walls mores dude

 

The roof.... It looks really blocky xD You might wanna add cobble slabs to it.

 

its better then Yahya tbh

 

nice

 

lol r u blind

 

You only went wrong with the Cyan Clay. Try more detailing, and try to merge the different block choices together better!!!

 

Your 3 clay choices for the exterior don't really fit together, and the walls are quite bland. Nice shape and all, and a decent interior.

 

inb4 NPC Grian sees this, falls in love with it & proceeds to making extravagant banks instead of rustic houses.

 

1 thing. Trees, landscape. Oh, that's 2!

 

I'm already working on that

 

The Interior is fine, but the Exterior needs a sense of Aystemetry, even though it's structured. For example, a cobblestone chimney, or a Balcony of sorts. Also, the Detail on the first level exterior is a bit blant, but the main problem are with the roofs, underdetailed and undefined. Overall, a very nice attempt, you have great potential!

 

Criticisms received! Will work on improving the bank. Thanks!

 

Needs more detail. And the interior is fine, the walls inside look a bit plain. Maybe add some chests, paintings, itemframes, etc.

 

I did add paintings and item frames, but the server I built it on makes it that if you're about 10 blocks away from the painting/item frame, it won't show up on your screen.

 

Everyone said this but please add more detail on the walls. Apart from that its good.