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Build Classic Barn

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Kaelan~, Jun 12, 2016.

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  1. Kaelan~

    Kaelan~ RIP VIP

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    for the first time ever, I tried to make a barn! constructive criticism is welcome, but don't talk about the landscape, it isn't finished yet. also, don't complain of the lack of detailing, it is a freaking barn.
    THE FRONT:
    upload_2016-6-12_16-48-47.png

    SIDE VIEW:
    upload_2016-6-12_16-49-46.png

    THE REAR:
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  2. Icicly

    Icicly bred

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    That looks pretty nice!
     
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  3. Kaelan~

    Kaelan~ RIP VIP

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  4. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    the roof is a bit flat but other than that it's pretty decent
     
  5. modern

    modern The irony is that I love the future

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    The two problems Of see that have not already been mentioned are the red contrasts too heavily with the wood, try changing wood type and varying different shades of red, and the side stairs look very out of place, how would they help support the barn?
     
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  6. HappyMcDoodle

    HappyMcDoodle Funni Computer Virus

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    Pretty nice looking barn. Good job. Also, the front kind of looks like a face with a beard and a unibrow, which gives you bonus points from me, intentional or not.
     
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  7. Mouse :)

    Mouse :) cicetil is no longer a slave VIP+

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    Depth is very rare on this build
    A barn doesnt have windows (or not every 2 meters/blocks)
    Roof is very basic
    The interior is very undetailed, it almost looks like it was done in survival mode
     
  8. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    The barn is very plain, maybe try adding a mixture of brick in the red clay?
    And maybe try adding a bit more shape, and maybe add detail to the inside, like make the path a bit more ruff, or add a mixture of dirt, coarse dirt and podzol.
    I hope this helped, and other than that, your build is great ;)
     
  9. Kaelan~

    Kaelan~ RIP VIP

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    Okay. thanks but as I said--
    1: it isn't super detailed because it is a barn
    2: don't talk about the terrain, I haven't done anything with it yet!
     
  10. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    The cobblestone doesn't compliment the build very much. Add more block variety to the ground with dirt, less gravel, and corse dirt.
     
  11. PearlescentMoon

    PearlescentMoon Proud Block Placer Slave VIP

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    Barns can be detailed, it's just up to whos vision it is. Also they were talking about the interior ground, not outside; Is that not counted as a part of the building itself?
    Anyway, keep up the building, have fun. :)
     
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  12. espen_tf

    espen_tf Well-Known Adventurer

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    LACK OF DETAIL
     
  13. captainganon

    captainganon God of k | Derpalope VIP+

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    It needs;

    More depth
    More detail
    An increased palette
    Screenshots that don't look like poop because of low settings
     
  14. Breadro

    Breadro Music by pedro VIP

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    ur face needs more depth and details




    (jk, its over-detailed)
     
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