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Build "tree Cave" Build - Rating?

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by TheNecromancer, Jun 20, 2016.

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Give me a rating!

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  1. TheNecromancer

    TheNecromancer dead

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    The title suggests, how good did I do?
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  2. Ascended Kitten

    Ascended Kitten The Greatest HERO

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    I like your use of custom trees, they do fit in very well!

    For the rest, the shapes are good, but you could work on improving the blocks chosen; also, try to improve the landscape-transitions!

    Hope I could help a bit!
     
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  3. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    I think the roof is a bit under detailed, and the little detail makes it look a bit plasticky. Also maybe you could use flowers with colors that go together, but other than that, its great :3
    O, and maybe you can make the hills and mountain more natural.
     
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  4. XIlayPVPX

    XIlayPVPX Travelled Adventurer VIP

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    you need to detail it more, some of the pictures looks dead :salted:
     
  5. Lexwomy

    Lexwomy Lexwomy HERO

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    The cave's great, everything's great. One problem. Your hills look artificial. Try randomizing the hill a bit. Don't make it look like a pyramid.
     
  6. Taf

    Taf Legendary Adventurer HERO

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    Looks pretty cool
    i have some tips for you, the cliff itself should go inward kind of, and dont use that many flowers, its distracting. keep to a few of them and put them in small patches around
    also, the cobble is way too high when it comes to the mountains, try doing something like 50%stone and 25% of the other blocks, the cave looks alright
    also, your waterfall could use some work, other then that its alright
     
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  7. Breadro

    Breadro Music by pedro VIP

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    Nice trees!
     
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