Build My Two Houses

Spoiler: The creepy mansion

Spoiler: The Other house

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yeah, I figured out that build get a lot of likes, so yeah.

 

Before everyone starts judging you or whatever, I do like the second house, just try putting more time and detail into it and it'll turn great!
Keep practicing and before long you'll be a pro

 

anyone else who wants to give me some constructive criticism, you are welcome

 

the roofs are nice, the walls need a bit of detailing, It's a good start. I'm not going to give specific tips because up until fine-tuning It's all up to you. if You don't know how you should detail it just ask, there are plenty of ways.

 

Your build is in my book a 5/10 But don't yet that discourage you, you can work from what you got. I'm going to start off with your walls. They could use some depth detailing take a look at some other builds to see how you can do this. But i can tell you NEVER have your logs on the same layers of your walls, always have it 1 block out. Next your roofs they seem off, It seems your taking inspiration from Real life roof styles, now that's not a bad thing but the way you did it seems odd. try doing more of a fantasy style roof. If you really want to make a real life style roof... I don't mean to be rude but try to do it better? Like try looking at pictures of real like roof styles in Minecraft. I would also say try mixing real like styles and fantasy styles. Your garden looks odd but that is an easy fix. You can Look at a tutorial or look at other peoples gardens and try to take inspiration from what they did. Overall what you have is a good start but needs work.

 

The first house is very flat. I suggest making the windows bigger and adding detail

 

Only good builds get lots of likes, the houses have no depth but the creepy house doesn't look creepy it just looks plain
but I like the structure of the second house

 

if you think it isn't creepy, wait until you see the inside.
Do you want to?

 

I dont realy care, most people do builds because they want to improve but you only want likes.

 

Sure, everyone wants likes. Likes are a GREAT thing, it helps let you know that you are doing a good job, and raises your reputation and things along that line a bit. However, that's just the inconsequential part of it. You should do it because you want opinions, feedback, and knowledge from what you create, aspiring you to achieve the goal of becoming something greater in what you want to do. But, aside from that. The house looks, okay... it needs some touch-ups in a lot of areas. It is very bland and generic... there is no significant detail to be seen... and there just isn't a feel to it that is atmospheric.