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Build House Build [need Suggestions!]

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by CookedPelvis, Mar 19, 2016.

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  1. CookedPelvis

    CookedPelvis Famous Adventurer HERO

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    Hi there. Right now I am building a house in singleplayer, and I might use it to help in a submission for the WC build team! I really need suggestions what to do on some parts of the house though, and ideas are welcome. Right now, the parts that don't have windows (just a plain wall) are places where windows would not fit with the interior of the build, so I need ideas.

    Here are some pictures of the exterior of the house:

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    What do you think? Note: not doing the terrain around it yet.
     
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    Amplitude Retired Build Team VIP+

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    It looks nice so far :)
     
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    espen_tf Well-Known Adventurer

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    looks nice, some places you could have more details :)
     
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    (Meric) No longer edgy

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    Looks VERY nice, though I have to say, on your first image, on that roof area a bit of stuff would be nice, hanging flowerpot, garden, window, etc...
     
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    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    It's a great start! The framework is nice and blocks are chosen pretty well.
    One note, on the first picture, the walls are very flat and boring, try adding windows or other details to spice it up
    and add a secret advertisement for your shop
     
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    FishWaffle It's ya boi VIP

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    This is amazing! If I were to add a suggestion it would be on the roof, try to mix it up by using similar colored clay blocks to help make the roof less static and more colorful. For example, if I'm using a green roof, I will have light green clay as my main color, then I will splash in some dark green to complement the primary color as a secondary (This can be mainly seen in the houses in Wynncraft, as they use the same principal for the roofs) . Also the back of the house seems to be pretty empty, try adding a window or more detail on the back to make it less bland.

    Besides that, this is amazing! Nice work!
     
  7. CookedPelvis

    CookedPelvis Famous Adventurer HERO

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    Yeah, I usually do that with my roofs, I am not sure what block to use on this roof however due to there only being one "shade" of brown-ish color. The reason there aren't windows already on the back is because it would conflict with the interior too much (there is a fireplace ;p)
     
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    FishWaffle It's ya boi VIP

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    I would recommend trying to use Gray Stained Clay as the secondary, but use it sparingly.
     
  9. tubarao312

    tubarao312 Professional Grian Wannabe

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    This looks like a house from Gavel! Good Work :)
     
  10. BigMacYoshi

    BigMacYoshi Card Master of Corkus & All-Knowing Psychic VIP+

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    Add some more Windows as well as trying to add something to be flat walls In the first picture, otherwise it looks amazing!
     
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    Nice color pallet. Perhaps some more windows on the side of the first pic. And some greenery and lanterns whatsoever
     
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    Breadro Music by pedro VIP

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    Dude! That house was sick! I don't see anything you could improve, except for the garden ;3
     
  13. Alex ;3

    Alex ;3 Building Scrub

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    the garden could use some work, maybe try moving the leaves back and making them look like taller bushes and putting some smaller flowers/grass in front of that
     
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