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Build Troms-inspired Villa

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Submonsterine, Dec 4, 2015.

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How would you rate this house?

  1. It's good.

    48.6%
  2. It's bad.

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  3. Somewhere in between.

    34.3%
  4. A 5 year old could do better.

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  1. Submonsterine

    Submonsterine Dur

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    Hello! Let's build a rustic house!

    Here is a Troms-inspired Villa build I recently built. I haven't had much inspiration to make things, so I decided to make a build with simple concepts that plug in some ideas from Grian's tutorials. Yes, there is no sense of elevation in this one, nor did I put any detail beyond the cobblestacks in the blank spaces of grass. I wasn't too focused on landscape design beyond the actual build, so pardon me for that. However, I would like to hear feedback and criticism on the actual build! :)

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    Welcome to the Tromscian Villa!

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    Here is an aerial view.

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    Here stands the Bountiful Well. This well water ensures care to create the healthiest plants.

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    Now, how would a wheat field feel complete without a flamingo?

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    Front view of the house.

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    Interior pictures. The other side mirrors this one. I'm usually not very good with interior, but I'm proud of how this one turned out.

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    Nighttime view.

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    This is the back of the house. I would agree that this needs some work.



    Hope you enjoy!
    ~Sub
     
  2. Frostburn

    Frostburn Famous Adventurer

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    +1 For floating villa that has infinite water.
     
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  3. Nitronicraft

    Nitronicraft Not an owner of GearSkinsLotto VIP+

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    apparently im the only non-hater on the poll :( i cri
     
  4. Frostburn

    Frostburn Famous Adventurer

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    Yea! Whoever voted negative things on the poll should be hanged!
     
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  5. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    It has the building design, but I noticed that the square Troms buildings have an entire 1-level gap.
     
  6. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    It looks really great, I do love the clay and wood look on the houses!
    As a next step, I would encourage you to not put hand made gardens that look to hand made, as you put on right there. ( I know that sounded confusing) It just gives it a plain feel. Nothing too special.
    The roof could use some extra adjustments, but I can really put my finger on it, of what to improve on that matter. Again, the roof looks rather plain.
    I do really find the walls around the farm unique, but I still would suggest adding some fences, preferably oak.
    I do really like your interior design for the houses, top notch rustic!
     
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  7. Coolfood

    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    Nice build, one thing is that, it all seems a bit small scale.
     
  8. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    it looks good well done. It may just be me but I find the light post to be a bit odd. Maybe make them have a bit more hight. And as you've stated the back needs some work. also the two pillars at what I assume is the gate look odd to me. Maybe redo the fire at the top especially the one on the left. fix those little things and this will be next to perfect
     
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  9. Accio

    Accio Im ackro

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    Npc Grian, is that you?
     
  10. Hiryu

    Hiryu not so lazy artist VIP

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    It looks plain (seriously, but no offensive dude)

    I saw this a lot of times in Wynncraft, BUT, it could be used for a another expansion :D
     
  11. Flick

    Flick The fourm nub, Survivor of 9/7 VIP

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    I think it would look nice to add grass (not the block) in the flower bed near the well.
     
  12. Minitinipower

    Minitinipower just a guy

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    It's good but I think there are to many flowers and the house if a bit plain. Other than that it's good.
     
  13. KnightRealm

    KnightRealm Well-Known Adventurer

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    Nice dude, I love it.
     
  14. Geekman2468

    Geekman2468 I'm always watching, you cannot hide.

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    It's a nice build, but I think the flags in the front that are made of stained glass would look better if they were made of colored wool.
     
  15. DarkSamus9000

    DarkSamus9000 What do I put here? VIP+

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    Overall, well done! It's better than I would have done :P

    The interior of the house is pretty good. Not much can be said there. The exterior seemed a little simple (and here I'm referring to - you guessed it - the roof). Don't forget even subtle variation with slabs, stairs, and planks blocks can make a big difference.

    The flower garden seems a bit too spammed with flowers. Try removing at least half of them and replacing some with other flower variants than tulips.

    Keep up the good work!
     
  16. BlahBlah161616

    BlahBlah161616 Light Theme User

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    It looks like something from Troms that would be found in Maltic.
     
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