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Build My Builder Application Pic.!

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by AndriX3S, Nov 30, 2015.

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  1. AndriX3S

    AndriX3S \\☢☣ Jägermeister ☣☢// VIP

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    Today i send my build application and i wantet to show you ppl the pic. i did send with the apply. They are from rendom builds i did in the last year. So here you go and i hope you like it!
    [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
  2. yotamdin

    yotamdin Is actually a cute anime girl in real life VIP

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    Builders say hello to your new team member.


    THIS IS AMEZING
     
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  3. Ackro

    Ackro The true Elite Quadbrid! HERO

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    Those are some very fine builds. Too bad...
     
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  4. Accio

    Accio Im ackro

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    What do you mean too bad?
     
  5. Ackro

    Ackro The true Elite Quadbrid! HERO

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    Nothing. It's an internal matter ;D
     
  6. Kahsol

    Kahsol Local Serial Liker CHAMPION

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    secret new builder confirmed?
     
  7. CookedPelvis

    CookedPelvis Famous Adventurer HERO

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    I love the builds, but there are some things you could change to make it look better.
    • The house with the green clay roof and spruce stairs with vines draped on it, there is little depth that I can see. The walls are on the same block as the support beams, making it look really awkward.
    • In all of the pictures, the ground is obviously bonemealed, which is just devastating IMO.
    • In the trees, there isn't any leaf block variation going on.
    • In the picture with the farm in it, the cliff wall is extremely plain, flat, and boring. Try adding block variation and depth. The farm being entirely full grown makes the crops look too perfect. Try adding in carrots, potatoes, and wheat at different stages, as well as have some of them in with the other crop to be realistic (wheat seeds spread into carrot plot, carrot plant misplaced in potato plot). Up on the cliff face... are those... could it be... oh my sweet lord... those are notch trees... EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW switch them out with custom made trees.
    That's all I could find, gl on application!
     
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  8. Troll4ever31

    Troll4ever31 Designed to be a moron.

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    0/10 needs more "hope you engoy".
    -Troll4ever31
     
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  9. Kogut

    Kogut Well-Known Adventurer

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    Nice troll.
     
  10. DarkSamus9000

    DarkSamus9000 What do I put here? VIP+

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    The only complaints I have are that the cliff next to the house in the second to last picture is completely vanilla generated. I'm not quite sure why you included it in the screenshot. Also, the wall around that farm somehow seems lacking in detail... Perhaps make the wall's height vary from part to part.

    But that aside, everything is 'MAZIN! Good luck on the application, you probably won't need it!
     
  11. AndriX3S

    AndriX3S \\☢☣ Jägermeister ☣☢// VIP

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    Well yea ik what you mean, but that wass just a rendom build i did in a vanilla world. And THX!
     
  12. Corcustos

    Corcustos It's what it's. CHAMPION

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    I'm going to go on a hunch here and say it's not a matter of if you will become part of the build team, it's a matter of when you will.

    Great builds, Andri. I love them. :D
     
  13. Cubie

    Cubie VIP+

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    Ehh.
     
  14. Ackro

    Ackro The true Elite Quadbrid! HERO

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    Ehh, Cubae?
     
  15. Coolfood

    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    Very natural and nice looking
     
  16. tasaid

    tasaid Well-Known Adventurer

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    very, very, good! you are great at building
     
  17. Nitronicraft

    Nitronicraft Not an owner of GearSkinsLotto VIP+

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    At first glance I loved it! But than I realized how much of the plants were bonemealed D: an awesome builder killing his build with bonemeal. Also pic 6 has easily identifiably vanilla terrain on the left. Only other problem is how solid the canopy is. I will cri 4 u.
    87/100
     
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  18. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    You're getting in.
    No doubt.
    Gl.
     
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  19. KeytarAshes

    KeytarAshes eternally monochrome VIP+

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    If you're not in the Build Team by next month or so, Im going to have to yell "SALTED ATE HIS FAMILY" in public. And I dont want that at all.
     
  20. @raziki9

    @raziki9 Skilled Adventurer

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    my god... if you aren't the best builder iv'e seen ever i don't know wut you are 100000/100000 absolutely amaizing
     
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