Build The Outside Of My Castle Build

Hello, i’m BlueMannChew and i just wanted to post my build that i made, enough chit chat lets see it

but i just need to thank Grian for the inspiring castle build video, it really helped me out, and i wouldn’t have done it without him.

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hm... i guess that doesn’t work, i’ll just post the link http://imgur.com/a/P4bFN

 

Great structure, although the towers look a bit too "cube"-styled ^_^

 

thats kind of what i was looking for

 

the woes of a cubic game
but yeah, maybe try a little more circular towers @BlueMannChew ?
It looks great though, I love the detail on the walls.

 

Its, ok. Here's some critisism.

The walls are nicely detailed with a cool pattern, but try to put some depth into your walls, not just a flat thing that only looks cool because it has a nice design on it.
Here are a few things you could add to the walls:
~Trapdoors
~Wood (your choice of what type)
~Redstone Lamps
~Leaves
~Your color theme (if you have one).

Your towers on either side, how can I say this, just lack something, I can't really put my finger on it. Just maybe... add something.
Hope I helped! (oh and don't forget to add some carpets with the inside).

 

alright! thank you too for your tips i shall work on it

 

52/100 FlubScore™ "Lacks subtlety"

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So I recommend making it flow better.

By this I mean make one that is build around some terrain. Even just making it in a vanilla generated world is fine.

Also make the towers less chunky. The clear cut square shapes make it looks the bad kind of chunky and funky. Like the Eminem Rap God kind of chunky but funny.

 

http://imgur.com/a/Fqn3w Updated Version

@Flubby-Senpai i made it less like a rap god, added some details also made the walls less flat

@RustikkElf

@Coolfood

is that better?

 

It does look better, the details matter! One think, add some block variety to the towers, I know you're trying to go for the imposing stone fortress look, but add a little bit of block design and variety. Think of a gilded design or crest, you don't have to go full out on that but try adding a little bit of that essence.

Great job though! It's steadily improving.