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Build Experimental/freestyle Tower

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by sorae, Nov 29, 2015.

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  1. sorae

    sorae drifting VIP

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    Haven't built in a really long time. I decided to experiment with mixing colors and shapes. IMO, it came out pretty well.

    If you have any suggestions for this, please leave them below in the comments!
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  2. Flubby

    Flubby left and accidentally became leftist VIP+

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    61/100 FlubScore™ "Nice feel, but needs more completion."

    The main issue here is the bottom being so open. It feels unrealistic. Even Wynn, a land of magic, doesn't have buildings that pinched. You want it to be like a woman with a hourglass figure. Except that it is a real woman and the indentation isn't huge.
     
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  3. xKindredKinesis

    xKindredKinesis .[_]. VIP

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    Is it just me, or does the Faithful pack make builds seem a bit too basic?
    The build is nice, but IDK about the pack...
     
  4. sorae

    sorae drifting VIP

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    Could you elaborate? Your explanation is pretty confusing.
    I honestly prefer Faithful since it's not too overwhelming like a bunch of other packs.
     
  5. CookedPelvis

    CookedPelvis Famous Adventurer HERO

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    I would consider using slabs and stairs to create interesting shapes
     
  6. Troll4ever31

    Troll4ever31 Designed to be a moron.

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    The tower itself is meh, not enough detail and block variation.

    And i get to enjoy the hideous combination of smooth lighting off and faithful.
    Why don't you install the poop texture pack already, it looks just as shitty. (pretty sure there is a poop texture pack out there, idk.)
     
  7. sorae

    sorae drifting VIP

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    blame my slow af computer
    I already did, if you didn't notice.
     
  8. Coolfood

    Coolfood The Coolest Food

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    What @Flubby-Senpai said, the tower is too narrow. I recommend having 2 tiers, a wider one below and then it thins and tapers off
    The style is great.
    The background in the pictures are great (that build server)

    and @Flubby-Senpai love your Flubb score!
     
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    Thanks for the feedback!
     
  10. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    I think it could use 1 more thing.
    Well I don't know that one thing, I suck at building.
     
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  11. sorae

    sorae drifting VIP

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    Only if you have a dirty mind.
     
  12. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    It looks good in general. Maybe have more actual structure to the build. This kind of looks like a magical floating thing. Also try not to use Grian's build school arches because honestly he does not know how to make a proper arch.
     
  13. sorae

    sorae drifting VIP

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    Then I'd like to see you build a better arch.
     
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