Build Emeraldonia (originally Rogue's Grotto And Tos Temple But Now On A Much Larger Scale)

and after that HUGE title you expected some huge, amazing, and completed? well? its huge, its amazing, but its definitely NOT completed. Its still a work in progress, but these are some screenshots of the place, i will update the screenshots and take the old ones down when I add something new, of corse i could have taken a whole lot MORE screenshots, but then it would be huge, so for now, here is 3:

 

Maybe some more screenshots? We didn't really get to see too much :/

 

its because its late where i am and I'm tired... maybe tomorrow, but did you like what you saw?

 

Yeah, looked pretty good so far.

 

Wheelebaro Village (the one in the forest) could use ALOT of work though, there is support to be farmland all around it

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and the large stone area, the "sheep catacombs" will be enclosed on the top, be decorated inside, and decorated on the outside to blend with Shard Mountain

 

32/100 FlubScore™ "Big, but lacks depth."

New Feature: Scores

Terrain: 23%
Structures: 27%
Organics: 10%
Scale: 48%
Finish: 12%

Reasoning

Terrain is 23% because it lacks leveling and smooth transitions. Try to find a place to learn and use VoxelSniper (server plugin)

Structures are 27% because of "Wheelbaro Village"'s lack of detail. It needs clear and good structures. Try copying Wynncraft houses in the Savanna and desert until you have that style down.

Organics are 10% because bonemeal trees are horrible. Always use custom trees in a professional build. It's clear you want to one day join the build team, but you need to learn to make custom trees first.

Scale is 48% because it has a clear and intended feel. It doesn't quite get across, but you can tell what is what.

Finish is 12% because it looks more like a tiny prototype.


I suggest you walk around Wynn and try to find out how to build like that.

 

Well I did say it was a work in progress, thank you for your constructive criticism, and remember, this isn't the finished product, one day it will look like crap and the next, BAM! It's gonna look masterful! I just finished the Emerald Forrest and also just started Wheelebaro Village today as well, I am going to go back and fix it all but until then, *grabs flint and steel* TIME TO BURN!!! Also the villages are very small, Emeraldonia is suppose to be a small island with a Forrest, and mountains, and in my lore, it sunk under the ocean, sorta an Atlantis type deal, which is why you don't see it in Wynn. And also there is one more village, if you saw the screenshot with the wool decal, that is the decal for Sheepston Village, which is where my old quest Sheeply Overlords takes place. And I will and one more town in the mountains ( once I get that outa the way) also I need a name for that town, it's a mining town, so plz come up wit somethings guys. And a name for the mountain range obviously

 

Don't ask me for names. My current build I am making for build team has it's screenshots in a folder called "Wynncraft Shit"

Within that folder are four folders:
"Shit"
"Misc shit"
"Build shit"
"Quest shit"

Inside of "Build Shit":
"Current shit"
"Old shit"

Inside of "Current Shit":
"App shit"
"Redacted shit"

Inside of "App shit":
"Shit camp" Screenies
"Shit valley" Screenies
"Shit peaks" Screenies
"Shit emerald mine" Screenies

Anyways, Lore isn't my forte so...

Also; nobody just makes something look good unless they are Mithrinthia.

 

Well that is a whole load of "shit" XDDDDDDDDDD and I'm done for today

 

Ok so i did some work and these are pictures of the 1st town/starting area of Emeraldonia, Rogue's Grotto (where my ancestors lived) and Sheepskin, The Land of Sheep, where my quest Sheeply Overlords takes place.

 

Here are some more that I couldn't fit in the picture:
This is a picture of the entrance, from here you can see the stain glass window of the ToS Temple, and the blazing peaks of Shard Mountain and Mt. Boulder.
The quaint little town of Sheepston, a small home in the lifts of Shard Mountain, it has a bank and an item seller (in the small tent)
The Sheepston Bank is a great place to visit! Whats this? a secret entrance? but where to? The ToS Temple!
this is the entrance into the ToS Temple, i take pride in my giant pointy stalactites. :)
This is the Tower of Sheep Temple. Its still heavily a work in progress caus it was my 1st build

 

and here is a picture of the current map:

 

Now we have some screenshots of Darkwood Forrest and Wheelbarro Village, and, something unexpected....

 

Although you seem to have a sense for design I recommend you to use more block-diversity,
also, some blocks aren't fitting (bedrock ;-:)

 

Ok so i was testing and i think it looks good, i was building in a cave i made and i used quartz to make a good representation of flowstone, a natural cave formation, in minecraft. if ya don't know what it is google it, I've seen it up close and its beautiful!

 

There is a really basic and ugly house in the savannah, its on the turn where you can go left to go to almuj, and straight to get to bremminglar.

 

Because...
of one single house?

Your comment isn't really helpful

 

The mountains look too man made and sharp. Try to make it more random/smoother

 

nice, but as someone said before, terrain transitions are a bit sharp..., for example, the flat dirt wall is jarring

 

Just saying in case he thinks about basing it on that one house.