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Build - Traveler's Bar -

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Wynslow, Oct 12, 2015.

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  1. Wynslow

    Wynslow Famous Adventurer VIP+

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    Hello! This is a very recent build I have made; the second one I'm showcasing since 9/7, for the Ulothera server. Expect to see this build somewhere else in a Ulothera sneak peek somewhere, but for now I'll spoil you guys a little by giving this to you.

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    (This is with Optifine's Extreme Zoom feature.)

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    Don't mind the random cobblestone and blocks, they're being used as markers for some of the terraining. That's also why the landscaping for this build is really flat. Oversized flag to compliment the roof front.

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    One of the sides.

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    The back, at an angle.
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    Ground view of the back. By taking advantage of wall details, I created a pattern that compliments each wall.

    These next few are for the interior (WOW, SUB ACTUALLY DID AN INTERIOR FOR ONCE!)

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    (An evil church organization...?)


    So, let me know what you think of this build! I love feedback and comments, so don't hesitate to point out any flaws or give compliments! It gives me more incentive to make my works better!
     
  2. omnom

    omnom discord: xunyte

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    Floors look sort of dull. Include variations of wood (stairs, slabs) that would fit the mood, and add some carpets, bro :)
    In my opinion, I wouldn't use clay blocks. I would use stained clay blocks (just a preference!)
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    On that part, don't just keep on using cobblestone. Use some wood on that. Variations are always dank, yo. And you should drape more leaves around the roof (makes it look a bit more natural)
    Overall, I like the building. Especially the outside :D (rad decorations).

    Nice job S(cr)ubmonsterine.

    Keep it up :D
     
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  3. Wynslow

    Wynslow Famous Adventurer VIP+

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    I actually tried a wood roof on the build at first; didn't come out how I wanted it to. Cobblestone already has a bit of "vairation" with its texture, and I wanted my roof to look somewhat clean and smooth, so I didn't use variation. The cobblestone ties the build together, I feel, because of the "Gyerian" feel of the Bar. I actually took the pictures before I finished decorating some of the interior, so no worries!, carpets are there. I did use texturing on my floors (seriously, how is the 1st floor's floor dull XD) with stairs and slabs creating "dents" in the floor, although the second floor is not all that aesthetically pleasing, I will agree. Clay was a matter of theme. Thanks for the feedback though, I really appreciate it!
     
  4. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    Somehow I could tell that the first was the Optifine zoom, just not sure why.
     
  5. Accio

    Accio Im ackro

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    o.o Whats the black sign back theere tell meeeee IM SOOOOO HYPED FOR ULOTHERA OMG COME ON GUYS ARE U RDY
     
  6. SageBuilds

    SageBuilds Irrational Potato Storage Designer VIP+

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    My favorite part of this build is probably your exterior wall decorations. You've done a nice job segmenting the build with different designs and patterns as you progress up the build. I would agree however that your roof is the weakest part. If you're using only one type of block for a roof, you really have to make up for that with the shape of the roof itself. If you give the roof a more natural (and slightly more randomized) look, it will suit your detail walls better. I also can see in your last pic that you haven't done much with the ceiling. Throw in some beams and supports in there! It'll make it look a lot cooler. That being said, all in all it's a pretty cool build.
     
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  7. captainganon

    captainganon God of k | Derpalope VIP+

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    inb4 sub new builder
     
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