Archer/Hunter Help Class Building (Help needed)

Hello so I kinda wanted to try to make builds but I have no experience. There are definitely a lot of good builds that already exist that I could use, but I wanted to try to make a build with decent dmg, ehp, and ws. So obviously I failed miserably. I ended up making a really dumb build and I don't think it's viable at all, it has pretty bad hp sustain so you probably need to use pots (pls no bully). Can someone tell me how to improve this build and leave some building tips in the meantime?
https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_0Au0mM0kQ0Wi0t80t80K40BR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92+c0o211D0o1g00001004fI
WynnBuilder build:
> Cumulonimbus
> Sparkling Plate
> Seipodon
> Dragon Dance
> Yang
> Yang
> Prowess
> Gigabyte
> CR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92 [w6w6w6]

 

tbh its a bit difficult to build like normal spring build cus the bow dont have mr
used resu (no bully i dont make builds)
https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_0Au0RZ0DS0Qr0K20t80Jg0BR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b920411211Q0e1g00001004fI
WynnBuilder build:
> Cumulonimbus
> Medeis
> Demon Tide
> Resurgence
> Moon Pool Circlet
> Yang
> Clockwork
> Gigabyte
> CR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92 [w6w6w6]

 

https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_0Au0RZ0DS0Wi0K20OK0K40BR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92+c11211k0o1g00001004fI
WynnBuilder build:
> Cumulonimbus
> Medeis
> Demon Tide
> Dragon Dance
> Moon Pool Circlet
> Diamond Hydro Ring
> Prowess
> Gigabyte
> CR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92 [w6w6w6]

i force 1/1 costs because 1) you seem to want it and 2) it's easier to compare the two builds this way, but i imagine that 2/1 + 10mr might make more sense here. sample build for this: https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_0Au0RZ0kQ0Wi0K20OK0TN0BR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92+X0t211e0o1g00001004fI.

your original build looks usable. sparkling plate isn't worth it on an intelligence-based build, but nothing else undermines it too much.

you commit to that by opting for whatever this is, which seems to be a variant of cdd. it's ok if sustain is missing from your build, but if you want it then you should consider cancer and resu. recently, forcing hetusol has been pretty popular as well.

 

no hp sustain, but good ws
https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_0Au0RZ0D407W0OK0K20TN0OM-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92000o241G1h1g00001004fI
WynnBuilder build:
> Cumulonimbus
> Medeis
> Dark Shroud
> Capricorn
> Diamond Hydro Ring
> Moon Pool Circlet
> Dragon's Eye Bracelet
> Diamond Hydro Necklace
> CR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92 [w6w6w6]

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https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_0Au0L30JL07W0TQ0K20K40BR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b920U0e211L1D1g00001004fI
WynnBuilder build:
> Cumulonimbus
> Hetusol
> Greaves of the Veneer
> Capricorn
> Draoi Fair
> Moon Pool Circlet
> Prowess
> Gigabyte
> CR-1A5A59A6O6v6v9b92 [w6w6w6]
dfusion neck for less tomes needed