Shaman/Skyseer Is This Good?

My friend made a WFA glass cannon shaman build a while ago which I thought was pretty smart since the SP in agi and def would somewhat counteract the low health and 0 hpr.

It had some problems though, mainly that there was no mana regen and it had negative mana steal, along with no walk speed buff, so I made this:
https://wynndata.tk/s/tq53x0

It still doesn't have any walk speed, but it has 6 mana regen, and it's not really much of a glass cannon anymore either. But because I'm not totally familiar with shaman, I just want to know if the damage is good.

It has 2 mana auras that do 7k damage, 10k with totem, along with 6 mana regen, is that good for a shaman or not?

 

this is better
https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_07R0K70E-07W0K00K20OJ0OM0BH0000211V1c1g00000
WynnBuilder build:
> Cancer֎
> Soulflare
> Efteling
> Capricorn
> Intensity
> Moon Pool Circlet
> Diamond Hydro Bracelet
> Diamond Hydro Necklace
> Royal Hydrangea []

 

so
https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_0250px0r506n0aK0U60TN0Es0BH00+m270e1Q1d00000
WynnBuilder build:
> Aphotic
> Time Rift
> Vaward
> Broken Balance
> Reminder
> Detective's Ring
> Dragon's Eye Bracelet
> Ebrithil
> Royal Hydrangea []
is the actual build (I'm the friend), and, while yours is obviously more tanky and has mana regen, I've got 10k auras for 1 mana. I'm still searching around for a build, so do you think I should stick to this one, or is that one better?

 

the mana difference way more than makes up for the damage difference...

if you don't mind a glassier build this one keeps trift (you really want a powder special weapon if you're using time rift,,)
https://wynnbuilder.github.io/#4_01B0px0T-07W0OK0OK0K40OM0Ak050527151D1g00001004fI
WynnBuilder build:
> Albacore
> Time Rift
> Ornate Shadow Cover
> Capricorn
> Diamond Hydro Ring
> Diamond Hydro Ring
> Prowess
> Diamond Hydro Necklace
> Cryoseism [w6w6w6]
dhydro slap go brrrrr

alternatively you can use aphotic for super slow

 

tankier but it doesn't do enough damage

 

you deal more damage in the long run if you have enough mana vs not having any

 

true