Build Upon The Mountainus Pillar

WOOOOO its been a while since ive been here..
Just wanted t show u what ive done its a mountain with a working boss!
I can upload the world but Idk
BTW how r u all doin
https://imgur.com/eVFG5AK
https://imgur.com/StqV7bT

 

I like the idea. It is very cool.

Just some small things you can work on.

1. Inside the circle of mountains add more. It is very plain. You can add a few structures and such.
2. Work on the stairs going up the big pillar. It just seems like circles going around and diagonally up the mountain. (but the ladders alternating a way up is pretty cool ngl)
3. It is very hard to see what is the story. What is that on top? A mushroom, a dojo? Just add a little bit more form to that. (I know it is a nest type thing but it is very hard to see that from the first screenshot)
4. I am gonna give you credit. The water at the base of the mountain is pretty dope but, add some gradient. It is just dirt then water when it should go: Dirt, coarse dirt, sand and then water. IMO
5. The terraforming overall is pretty okay. I can still see places where you forgot to smooth out the spheres.
6. The bridge is the first thing I saw in the first image. I really like the colors but the bridge is to flat (Yea I know it is Minecraft but still my paint stands)

Last but not least, 7. ADD VEGETATION. there is no trees at all in your build.

You have a really unique idea just take more time on the build in general :D


PS: I am doing pretty well, you?

 

How did nobody like this?
This looks epic!

 

Thnx for the good criti will work on these Its my first time terraforming so im tryna get used to it I feel like that sand idea is good and will add that and update this thread + vegetation is something I have to add.

 

@DoctorFam touched it up a bit whaddu think?

 

Amazing! a little bit more terrain variatons (hills, roots and diffrent terrain colours) and you are set. Good Job!

 

http://prntscr.com/ocx7gc Instead of just a big pillar make it a little more realistic kinda like this. (this took me 10 mins and I didnt bother with detail but you get the idea)

 

WHAT ARE THOSE OUTER MOUNTAINS

i think i threw up in my mouth a little