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Build Some House Thing I Think I Dunno But Its Medieval So Its Sexy Cuz We All Know The Only True Build Is

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by saltii, Aug 6, 2018.

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  1. saltii

    saltii Well-Known Adventurer CHAMPION

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    medieval, (its a continuation of the short title)

    anyway here bye
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    no interior cuz i been build for 3 and half hour now im bored an tired i take break bye
     
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  2. Moldavite

    Moldavite help

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    Some good stuff:

    -I love the shape off the build! The shape is odd, but when I mean odd it actually looks really good! This can fit Wynncraft really well.

    - I like the tower with the flag at the back of the build! It's like the cherry ontop of a cake.

    - The roofs are also good.

    Some critique:

    - Second time looking at it, It's a little bit messy and a tad bit overdetailed.

    - I kinda don't like the look of that merchant post thingy (the one with the red and white wool) the cloth or whatever is dropping downward too much.

    - Palette is kinda... Over the place.

    Anyway, bye xd
     
  3. Skywalkinerate

    Skywalkinerate For The Wynn

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    This is perfect to put in Ragni
     
  4. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Hey, you should try using more types of wood. =)
    Maybe less fences/cobblestone walls in general, too. Neat job. Show us interior xdd
     
  5. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    This build is satisfactory when it comes to shape and form, I really like how you have included the different shapes, I think that is very good especially compared to some other builders, here on wynn. But there are somethings that are still lacking with this build.

    Deapth in the walls: spaming stairs and cobble stone walls is not adding depth, in fact you are doing the exact opposite, by doing this you negate the effect of those beams that you put to support the walls. Slab spamming is a bad habit and I strongly urge you to get rid of it.

    Pallet: Oak, Spruce, Wool, Cobblestone, Logs... Really?!? We are in 1.12 my friend, not 1.6.4 Please PLEASE, update your pallet, be bold. use some prismarine, throw in some netherbricks, with green wool and concrete, instead of wood try brown mushroom blocks, Be bold! add a splash of color, learn to use Block Gradients.

    Diagonals, Minecraft has a habit of making its builds seem like its on roots, try adding a diagonal part to every house, it might be a balcony or one of those windows that stick out, this really makes your build feel more alive and believable.

    Roofs: Generic roofs are boring! Stop doing Grian roofs and triangular ones, try innovating, add a dragon heads, add detail to roofs, maybe there are one or two windows sticking out! do what ever you can to break up the roof into sections. This will tie your build together, as maybe a finial touch.

    This build is alright but the presentation and excecution is definitively lacking. You have the skill to improve and become a great builder. Start with these little things and you will eventually get better!
     
    Last edited: Aug 8, 2018
  6. Quint

    Quint least estrogenated scripter HERO

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    me likey likey
     
  7. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Lmfao
    Best line ever.
     
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