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No, he isn't. He's definitely Chaotic.

 

What?

 

@Aarakocra spyro says you know how to use the Homebrewery mind teaching me?
I just need to know how to like at bold text and stuff like that

 

Did I mention the construct-based Artificer subclass I found?

 

I’ll do my turn in ~an hour, I need to access the map for it.

 

He plays as chaotic, but I haven’t made him change his alignment yet

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Nothing, I just like saying that XD

 

Idk. Maybe sent link?

 

http://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/HynLJov_l

 

Here's a quick guide to that stuff.

Spoiler: Guide

# Big Heading
Normal text under a big heading has an enlarged first letter. Just something to take note of.

## Medium Heading
### Small Heading (Underlined)
#### Small Heading
##### Black Text Thingy
*Italics*
**Bold**
***Bold Italics***

For monster statistics, tables, and the like, go to the top of the page and use the settings there to create a preset one. Don't be afraid to experiment with the system!

 

Thanks!
going to cook this thing up might use it... might now IDK either way definitely will be fun.

 

Yeah, that kind of artificer makes lots of sense. A real inventor.

 

Is there a way to make text bigger?
Kinda hard to read becuase of small text.

 

Not that I know of. The larger heading/text sizes (try the black text?) and zooming in can help.

 

SO i finished!
https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/ByQtdid_FM
here's the link if there's anything you think i should change let me know.

 

As far as I know, Alas only defended himself so far, he never attacked first since we started the campaign.
WHILE EREVAN KILLED A MAN WITHOUT HESITATION ! MUAHAHAHAHAH ! (Ok, it was a dangerous enemy and I slammed a door in his face.)

I should be "True annoying" or "True clown".

Let's create a HB alignement XD

 

1. Wording is everything. Saying that one would ‘get sunlight sensitivity’ doesn’t explicitly mean that they get disadvantage on attack roll in sunlight. It just means that they are sensitive to the sun.
2. For bite, rounded up or down on health regained?
3. So, a level 1 Sorcerer can just spend 8hp to cast any level 4 spell? And, can you upcast with this spellcasting ability?
4. Spelling.

 

Ok so criticisms:

Abilities have names. Don’t just be like “Level 1 Feature” do like “Fangs is Death (Level 1)” or whatever

The “d” in the bite damage is capitalized for some reason

Is the bite attack an unarmed strike? Are you proficient in it? These things should be clarified.

Sorcerers usually get two Level 1 abilities. I would just split the Bite and Health Casting into two different features.

Several spelling mistakes (maximum is spelled wrong several times), forgetting spaces, etc.

Sorcerers got their final subclass ability at level 18, not 20

Level 6 ability is OP. Unlimited flight is really powerful for a level 6 ability. Draconic sorcerers don’t get that power until level 14. Maybe it lasts x amount of time and/or can only be used x amount of times per rest? Also, statistics remain unchanged? So... a bat who’s size is medium? That should be clarified. And the bite buff, is that in general or while in bat form?

Level 14 ability I like, but is super vague. Firstly, don’t state the DC for a class that already has a DC. Just say it uses the spellcasting DC. Also, you don’t state the effects. You state it’s a charm, but that’s it. You never actually say that a failed save causes the creature )m(you said creature, not humanoid) to be charmed by you. So as of right now, a failed save does nothing. Also, how long does it last? Do they get repeat saves on damage? The ability itself I like tho, a charm that costs sorcery points

Level 20 (should be 18) is also nice, but I would suggest a cost of like 3 points. To compare, the Draconic subclass final ability costs 5 points. Also, clarify how the swarms work. It seems like the bats and rats never go away, which is fine if that’s what you intend. If not, check your wording. Also, do they roll their own initative? Do they use the sorcerer’s initiative? Do they obey verbal commands? Telepathic commands? Clarification is needed

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I like the abilities and everything, but just clarify your abilities

 

Oh god that's a big wall

 

Good points.

Restate what the sunlight sensitivity does

Clarify the spellcasting. I’m assume you can’t cast higher than you have slots for. And that you can’t cast spells you don’t know.

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I will contest about the bite though. Unless stated otherwise, DnD always rounds down. That doesn’t need to be stated

 

For the spell thing, it just sucks to assume, though, because then it’s not REALLY cheating if you go against the assumption.

And I didn’t know about the bite thing.