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Build Would This Be Enough To Get On The Build Team?

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by bluepenguin1002, Mar 11, 2018.

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  1. bluepenguin1002

    bluepenguin1002 Waddling penguin

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    Heeeeeeeeeeeey So I've been thinking for awhile now about applying to the build team again but im not quite sure i have enough work soooooo....
    Here's my current builds (If you'd like to suggest something feel free ALSO i like doing a challenge where you give me 2 blocks and i have to use hem into a build)

    https://bluepenguin1002.imgur.com/all/
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  2. Tekenen

    Tekenen Professional Loser VIP+

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    linky doesn't work ;-;
     
  3. bluepenguin1002

    bluepenguin1002 Waddling penguin

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    Yep sry was fiddling
    I set it up now
     
  4. ???

    ??? ??? GM

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    yes


    (it's not enough.)
     
  5. bluepenguin1002

    bluepenguin1002 Waddling penguin

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    K well uh build suggestion?
     
  6. Linwood Welheart

    Linwood Welheart RPGing Teenager.

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    Hmm. The biggest problem I see is the amount of detail. I don't see a lot of it.

    First off:
    A lot of your buildings look rather 'flat'. Flat walls, dodgy roofs and some other things that are hard to explain with just typing.

    Second:
    The color contrast is lacking. This is especially noticable in the village you've built. The green colors of the walls and the light brown color of the stairs don't fit together. For the church, try using different kinds of stone blocks. Some have cracks in them, some have moss on them, try to use that. But mostly, select atleast 4-5 basic colors or textures you want to use in your building.

    Third:
    Interior design. Now this can be hard, especially with big building like the church and the sea temple thing. They leave a lot of open spaces that need to be filled up. Yes, you have the basic things that are needed in a church, but there is still a lot of open space left to use. Try to increase the size of some of the sofas, add some extra features that a church has. This falls together with the detailing, if you can change the way the walls look, things will already look better then normal.
    Try to build some smaller houses first, like the ones in the village, and fill them with the basic needs to life.

    These are my tips, hope you can use them.
    Questions are welcome.

    P.S. I can always sent you some images if you'd like.
     
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  7. bluepenguin1002

    bluepenguin1002 Waddling penguin

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    Right thanks lin
    I'll try to make my next one less flat.
     
  8. Qulaey

    Qulaey weeb

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    Please don't take this to harshly... ( ಠ ͜ʖರೃ)

    these are some advice to improve your building :D

    Try and develop a shape that makes sense for your buildings. Your buildings look weird and mis-shaped, your roofs don't fit the walls. and you don't have a set specific style for a group of buildings, you can't really learn how to do this its just practice by doing it over and over again. (◕‿◕✿)

    Actually take time picking a block pallet. Green clay and oak stairs DON'T FIT WELL. Try to make sense of the blocks you are using, just use your brain and some common sense and think "what blocks look best togather?" when building always take a step back and ask yourself "does this build look good?" ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

    Learn how to use GoPaint, Voxel, Worldedit for terrain. (°ロ°)☝ NEVER have flat terrain... please. Mountains terrain provides contrast and provides a back drop to your build. In your builds you have no height variation at all, especially in that village build that you made. The trees that you have made look un-natural as it has no branches what so ever. ~(˘▾˘~)

    Never hand build organics, use a combination of Voxel and Worldedit brushes, unless extremely skilled do not attempt to build small organic creatures like that you have made in your last picture. ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ )
     
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  9. GoodNermss

    GoodNermss Your friendly neighborhood robot

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    To be completely honest, a lot of your builds are a lacking in areas already explained above. Your builds are pretty square if that makes any sense, which doesn't look too appealing to the eye. If you want my opinion (which isn't saying much) you should try looking up building channels like Grian or Jerracraft for inspiration and get an inside on building techniques. Finally, and this applies to almost everything you want to improve in life, keep building frequently. This is one of the best ways to improve. Also, don't be afraid to try something big, seeing that most of your builds are on the small side. Last piece of advice I have is to post some of your builds on the Wynncraft discord. Specifically in the #your_work section, people are there to give you criticism (even if it may be harsh). You might even get a glimpse of other builders in there and you could learn a thing or 2 from them.

    Boom, you just got advice from someone who doesn't even build you're welcome.
     
  10. ghost of wynn

    ghost of wynn Ghost of wynn

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    It's too flat for wynn.. if you look at wynn builds they are with detail and bendy...
    Wynn builds are also integrated into the area, Olux is poor and dark, Llevigar is rich and shiny. these buildings have no background.

    You have somthing but it's not SO amazing it'll get ya on the team.
     
  11. bluepenguin1002

    bluepenguin1002 Waddling penguin

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    Well i guess i'll build something big then big and not square.
     
  12. Moldavite

    Moldavite help

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    There is only one tip to get on the build team

    Binge-watch Grians build tutorials and your a fine builder in no time.
     
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  13. ThatApricot

    ThatApricot ThisMan

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    Its not enough but you just need to practice and you'll get there
     
  14. NubPotato

    NubPotato broke af HERO

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    He's not even kidding, that guy will make you a master in no time
     
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