Fanfiction About Wynncraft

I have decided to start my first fan fiction , and what is more , it's my first fiction. The story , of course since I'm posting here, is about the adventures of a group of friends in wynncraft. Keep in mind since wynncraft is still changing here and there and my story may take a bit of time to keep in track with the lore, therefore i hope everyone reading this can tell me the most update or interesting things that has happened to you in wynncraft through replys or Pms... I want to make this story as appealing, unforgettable and amazing as possible and while i may not post daily and i will definitely put a lot of effort in to it. so i do hope you enjoy. Here is a little sneak peak of my story. Of course i don't own everything in wynncraft apart form the story itself.

A sneak peak to what you will read and imagine:

Two horses galloped across the grass, the wind blew gently, softly waking up the people inside the carriage that the horses were carrying. The caravan driver breathed in the air and took a peek at the stirring passengers inside.

'...' The driver thought, figured it would be better to let the passengers wake up themselves than arousing them from their slumber. It has been a tiring trip from Fruma to Wynn after all. But to the driver, delivering passengers, or more specifically new soldiers from Fruma to Wynn isn't something new, in fact he's been doing that for quite a while, and this trip is nothing out of the ordinary, he's been doing these trips for so long and so many times he can complete the journey with his eyes close...

The caravan has just passed through the huge wooden gates, settled in the middle of a gap between the mountains. The gates opened, allowing the caravan in. After he passed through the gate, the thing that separates Fruma and Wynn. The gates closed once more, waiting for the next recruits. For the recruits, their new life as soldiers and protectors began from this moment onwards.

The caravan moved to the side of the stone and dirt road, as the driver stopped his horses and feed them with some hay.

'Ragni outskirts... We made it.' the driver looked at the familiar sight. The sight was stunning to him every time, even though he had been here time and time again. The horses finished their hay and rested. They exhaled loudly, as a sign of tiredness and weariness but also a sign of telling each other 'good job', the horses have been through a lot together and developed a strong friendship.

based on where the players start...

Much More chapters will be posted in June on my wattpad account : SkywalkerCinerate

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pls help me make the story by sharing your most memorable things in wynncraft, ill tag the user for giving the inspiration. bascailly ill be making the flow of the story based on quests and lore but also your adventures. or else the story will be too predictable. Coming in June.

 

Lol, asking the real questions.

 

didn't though of that far yet , maybe I should put it like this . There is a love and shippings but nothing lemon , just use imagination if you feel like it .

 

Wynncraft lore in extra detail

 

Yes , indeed and I need all the help I can get to make sure of it .

 

I see your a man of culture as well

 

Same as me.

 

I guess it's kinda good but you keep changing tense. It's just very amateurish to change tense in a story and it disrupts the entire story, for me at least.

This bit is in past tense. "Galloped", "blew", "carrying", "thought".

But this bit is in present tense. "has" but more importantly it just sounds wierd with a few errors that makes it sound pretty bad actually. There are more things I can point out but won't. At least right now. I do like the start though with the descriptions.

 

I see , sorry I'll made sure it'll be double checked when I post it.

thx for the reminder .