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Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Rejask, Jan 19, 2018.

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  1. Rejask

    Rejask Well-Known Adventurer

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    First one : "The Chase" *Not finished*

    Second one : "Cool Enderman Thingu" *Not finished*

    Third one : "Color Ending" (I had an idea for a horror game, and through it you will progress and find out about a saddening story, but at the end, when the sadness is resolved and the tragic event is cured, the game will have a burst of color, giving the landscape it's nature and life back.) *Finished I think*

    Fourth one : "Dragon Priest's Downfall" (I love Skyrim and all of its mods, so it was only a matter of time before I did something, but since I'm not good with more realistic art, I did it in a 2-d style I've never done before) *Finished I think*



    I really like Wynncraft. And I also like making art for it. Though, the only thing here connected to Wynncraft is the minecraft figures (and things I've done before), I still wanted to post this somewhere.
     
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  2. The_Pl4nte

    The_Pl4nte Travelled Adventurer

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    I don't really like ur drawings
     
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    Pykkxie Professional Vase Breaker

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    man can i just say? i really love your art!!!! its very expressive and impactful, and the composition seems to flow so naturally in every piece! do you take classes? youre really good
     
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    Tekenen Professional Loser VIP+

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    Why say that?
    Someone put a lot of effort in his drawings and this is the last thing he wants to see here.
    If you don't like it, try to make something good looking yourself, and hang that on your wall, but don't hate on someone else's art.

    @Rejask don't worry about what he is saying, your art is way better then what many people could make!
    Keep drawing!
     
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  5. The_Pl4nte

    The_Pl4nte Travelled Adventurer

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    Dude, thats the liberty of expresdion,if i want i can say my opinion and he will do better things if he accepts the bad opinions.

    For me, a 11 years old can do better
     
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  6. Stormarend

    Stormarend The classes DO NOT correspond with the elements.

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    He just said he doesn't like it, he's not hating. Effort does not equate to skill. The "make something good looking yourself" argument is never valid. He's entitled to his own opinion and you're the one hating.
     
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  7. The_Pl4nte

    The_Pl4nte Travelled Adventurer

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    thank you bro
     
  8. Zitrine

    Zitrine Lore-kun CHAMPION

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    If he doesn't have anything good to contribute he shouldn't have commented any negative comments. I'm fine with someone not liking anything if they have a valid excuse.

    "I don't like your drawings" - No.

    "I don't like your drawings because <reasoning>" - Yes.

    If you don't have anything good to contribute, don't contribute at all.

    Rejask, your art is simple but it's pretty charming :3 Keep doing your stuff!
     
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  9. The_Pl4nte

    The_Pl4nte Travelled Adventurer

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    and if i don't like but there isn't a specific reason? i can say it anyway you can do nothing for that
     
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    Tekenen Professional Loser VIP+

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    but why would you say it then?
    '' you're the one hating''
    ''Dude, thats the liberty of expresdion''
     
  11. Stormarend

    Stormarend The classes DO NOT correspond with the elements.

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    You weren't expressing your own opinion, you were telling him what to do.
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    Why is someone not allowed to say "I don't like your drawings". I doubt @Chr0m4Cactus is an expert on the topic of art critique. There doesn't even have to be a reason for you not to like something, sometimes you just don't. You might as well be saying you can't vote on any polls because you aren't explicitly giving a reason as to why you agree or disagree with something.
    How is this in any way better than what he said.

    "I like your art" - Yes.
    "I don't like your art" - WTF WHY U HATING U STUPID FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT.
     
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  12. Stag2001

    Stag2001 360 mlg hipster cat CHAMPION

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    Okay guys, let's all stay calm. Everyone has their own opinion. However, @Chr0m4Cactus , I recommend next time if you don't like someone's drawing, say why. Constructive criticism is generally much more appreciated than something like "I don't like your drawings". As for @Tekenen and @Stormarend , let's leave at this, okay? No need to go into detail as to who was wrong and who was right.
     
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  13. The_Pl4nte

    The_Pl4nte Travelled Adventurer

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    Ok
    Lol @Stormarend you're totally right.
    i'm not "hating" i just don't like it and i'm giving my opinion but they don't (or they don't want) to understand that.
     
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    Anbu yeet these squares! HERO

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    Dang, I really love your art! :D It's very unique, the last piece looks amazing, the poses are really good! Keep up the good work, I think you've got some amazing potential! ╭( ・ㅂ・)و
     
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    The actual art, I would say it is decent. The color palette and proportions are sometimes a bit iffy (like alex's legs in the first drawing).
     
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    Rejask Well-Known Adventurer

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    Thank you!
     
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    Rejask Well-Known Adventurer

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    Imagine a professional, they have only two years of doing what they do, and they are already one of the best artists in the world. It's a great thing. Let's say this person was nine, and now is eleven, and is creating art more beautiful than [insert_artist_here]. Yes, an eleven year old can do better. But not most can, nor the type of eleven year old you were referring to, that's why you see older people who are likely older in age at galleries. I don't think most people know how to *draw either; I sure don't, hence the computer art. That could be said with anything, that not most know 'how to'. Do you know 'how to' use MS Paint to create art that is equal to or better than most?

    If not, that's o.k..

    If you do or don't have a reason that's o.k. too. But next time you type your opinion, please use the correct spelling, that was the only bad thing about your opinion, the rest was fine.
     
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    Stormarend The classes DO NOT correspond with the elements.

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    I'd just like to give some genuine criticism for a change.

    So, controversial opinion incoming, your art is not good. First of all, and I think you know this, I'd recommend using a better drawing programme. There are lots of cheap and/or free ones out there. Secondly, you said you use a computer because you don't know how to draw. Huge mistake, in my opinion. You have much more control and fluidity in your drawing than with a computer when you start off and you'll get rid of the pixels, which, frankly, don't make the art a whole lot better.

    Now for your first drawing. This is just my opinion, but don't do Minecraft art, or at least stylise it. Minecraft isn't exactly the best looking game ever and using its art style usually results in weird and inconsistent art. This is very clearly the case for this drawing. Most of the shapes of the characters either aren't perfectly cubic or cuboid, or don't have properly connecting lines. It isn't very pleasing to the eye. There are some very simple tricks you can use to improve drawing 3-dimentional shapes. Your drawing has a one-point perspective, said point is on the far background, where the skeleton is standing. You need to make sure that all of the line in the grind pattern on the floor are pointing there. Now, the real elephant in the room is Alex, which has a really strange design. Her head isn't properly cubic, her right arm (our right) looks very strange compared to the left arm and her hand is much wider than her shoulder. This isn't the case for her left arm. Last but not least, the motion lines don't work at all, again, it's the Minecraft art style really holding you back. Due to the cubic appearance of the character they aren't very dynamic, so the motion lines clash with the rest of the piece.

    I won't say as much about the other drawings, there are definitely still some areas in which you could improve. The points of critique for the first drawing also carry on the the second one, thought to a lesser degree. Apart from that, its straight leg isn't 3d, as opposed to his arms and the bent leg looks very strange, being so far away from the body. I also can't understand what the purple line is about.

    I kinda like the third drawing, thought its execution could've been better. It looks sort of messy but I really like the idea.

    The fourth drawing is by far your best. It has very dynamic shapes and mostly ditches the Minecraft stuff. Though I'd still recommend you get rid of it completely. The thing that bugs me most is that you can see the characters' bodies through their clothes. Other than that, get rid of the particles under the left character and maybe replace them with something that fits the art style more and remove/revamp the landscape. Focus on dynamic (curved) lines and shapes for the characters. In the middle there are some eraser mistakes by the way, some of the lines are cut of in a weird way.

    Well, that's about it.
     
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    Ur not
    And for the rest.........uh.......

    (Only kidding) i just said "i don't like ur drawings" i dont have to explain myself on it.
     
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    Looks amazing! I really like the style of it, it’s unique and you used the cubes and squares really well.

    The 3rd drawing is my favorite, except for the sky around the shadow that looks odd to me, I think making the area around the character with black equally all around it will look better. Other than that the tree looks really good with the shading.

    The 4th one is also good, looks dynamic, and the 2nd one is good for a wip.

    The 1st one really reminds me of the dropper map, where you go through a tunnel to the next level. I think you could change the way Alex’s legs are facing, they look like they’re stretching and glitching out, but other than that it’s good.
     
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