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Build What Do You Think Of This Build? 5.5

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Moldavite, Jan 2, 2018.

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  1. Moldavite

    Moldavite help

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    -deep exhale- Finally! After several days of hard work, its finally finished! :D What do you think of this town? Is it enough for qualification of my build team application? Got criticism? And most importantly, what do YOU think of this build?
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  2. HalfCat_

    HalfCat_ Supporter of Catania HERO GM Builder

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    It's nice. The houses are really good and the tree looks good. Although you have to terrain a little bit. From what I have seen all you do is build houses and buildings. Try using voxelsniper and create some cool terrain.
     
  3. Entaurix

    Entaurix This Space Available HERO

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    A nice build although, whatever the black and blue blocks are supposed to be (lights or something?) seem out of place with the rest of it, perhaps change their colour?
     
  4. Chise

    Chise A loli dressing like a cheese >w< VIP+

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    Kinda want to see how you can develop your building knowledge on different types of biomes
    As you know, wynncraft dont really have a city that was built in the base of plain land
     
  5. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    Add terrain
     
  6. (Meric)

    (Meric) No longer edgy

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  7. tjmoore04

    tjmoore04 IMMA DO IT VIP+

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    Try adding more detail to your builds and show the interiors. For the tree add some leaves and vines to make it more realistic. Most importantly try using voxel sniper and world edit to make several types of terrain and show your ability to build in them.
     
  8. Euxis

    Euxis Well-Known Adventurer VIP

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    These builds are pretty good! I would build on terrain, not a flatworld, but I see how it helps because you don't have to bother with the uneven land.
     
  9. CookedPelvis

    CookedPelvis Famous Adventurer HERO

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    Like others said, it would help if you built onto terrain.

    The hanging banners are nice, but try using fences instead of that black wool.
    To get into the build team, you should show examples of different "styles" of building. Steampunk, Swamp, Sky, are all different styles of building and terrain.


    The detail level seems good to me.

    The tree is pretty realistic already, and it looks pretty nice. For this type of tree, I would advise against adding vines. It's not a willow tree, and it's not a swamp tree either.
     
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  10. valvoid

    valvoid Build/CMD Hybrid HERO

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    Building look nice, but I would recommend adding some terrain throughout it rather than just flat ground
     
  11. DaFamousRedPanda

    DaFamousRedPanda forever ded VIP

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    This town is really neat! But if you were to add it somewhere, where would you?
     
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