Art My Second Attempt To Make Art - Anyone Advise For Me?

Ye, I'm not good, but I just thought like sharing it (My first one was too horrible, and I don't want to hurt your eyes).

Spoiler: The drawing

 

Awwww, it's so cute!!!! I don't think I'm good enough to judge this.

 

Hi! I hear you want critique!

first off, I want to say that your composition is very the focus is very clearly on the rabbit and the grass makes for some nice background that doesnt stray from the focus. the rabbit anatomy is also quite accurate which is definitely a plus

some things that you could improve on is probably lines/lineweight. lineweight pertains to how dark the line is and how thick it is. the ears of your rabbit are an excellent example of how you did it well. dont be afraid to push down on the pencil or break out a black pen to highlight the most important parts (eyes, arms, feet, spine) confidence in line-making is key! make detail lines or finer parts of the rabbit lighter such as the whiskers, fur, and whisker freckles. next: i also noticed you attempted some shading at the neck and belly area, but its not too obvious. change up the lines a little to differentiate between hair and shading (crosshatching is a good way at shading this type of realistic drawing) finally: the fur of the rabbit shows some direction in the fur which is really good! it makes it seem more real and detailed. i would recommend you take more time to consider how the hair is drawn: the fur is part of the rabbit not just a minor detail.

all in all, i really like this piece and you have a lot of potential in realistic drawing!

 

Thanks a lot, I will use your advise today!

 

Very nice drawing! Here's some things I thought of on the fly:



~Bubbles

(Please don't judge the poor quality, I made this late at night and rushed it a tad)​