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Build Ancient Rome Inspired Sky Temple

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Peter_Marius, Sep 27, 2017.

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  1. Peter_Marius

    Peter_Marius mhm... CHAMPION Builder

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    Aya Very Serious Gensokyo Journalist HERO

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    Caldie The World is Dead I Guess VIP+

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    It looks like u planned well, the overall effect is really good.
    But I think you need to work on the smaller details. For example the pillars holding up the brick roofs look kind of flimsy, add some extra support at the top.
    Also break up some of the textures, the floor in particular.
    And finally u need to add more vegetation,
    Well done, cool build :3
     
  4. Snerp

    Snerp Grand Terrainer Modeler HERO Builder

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    Well...
    There's no real interiors in the build

    Most of the houses are just 4 pillars with a brick roof :/
     
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  5. tjmoore04

    tjmoore04 IMMA DO IT VIP+

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    Before I say anything, try not to use texture packs as it is often used to make under detailed builds look better. A truly good build looks very good in vanilla textures.
    With that said it isn't very good. There isn't much detail in the floor and roofing/pillars. Try more textures and maybe some more colors to make it look more grand and powerful. The terrain looks pretty good though. I'd need more close ups of the terrain to really evaluate it though.
     
  6. Dohdo

    Dohdo I'm back. Cancer in it's purest form.

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    Ever seen rodoroc in vanilla? It looks like a master piece of you ask me
     
  7. tjmoore04

    tjmoore04 IMMA DO IT VIP+

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    All of the cities do for there style.
     
  8. Eisenmaus

    Eisenmaus Well-Known Adventurer

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    I dont like the terraforming
     
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